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Mic Check.......1,2........1,2.........Gingerbread up in 'dis bitch.

"Run as fast as you can" "Ginger", my oven's Waitin On Yo Entrance
I'll rap circles around u, leave u spinning like a Dredle On A Thin Dish
U Couldn't drop no "Smart Shit" if it came out the ass of Einstien
My Shine Blinds Guys, point a knife at yo head, stab yo Mind's Eye
You fell of the world like a Merry-go, Now I Own Yo Soul
U think u gettin "down n dirty", yet, dug a depper Hole than a Mole
Fuckin Newb, you ain't got no Fuckin Juice, hip hop's Fuckin U
With these slugs i'm not gay, but i'll put something "hard" Up IN U
So now U no how it feels to lyrically get yo Ass Whipped
Trying to overthrow my kingdom? U couldn't overthrow a Matress .....Weaklin

Yo, your public profile lists your job as fucking 'money getter'
I'm about to drive your ass insane like an itchy Christmas sweater.
Your rhymes are weak, uninspired, paint-by-numbers to the letter
Gingerbread in the fuckin' house; with you Mom's there is no better.
I'm set to flip the script on you, like a metaphoric giant
Rapin' fronters in the dome like the lyrical Kobe Bryant.
You's a fag, 29, a pussy. Go apply your Mom's cosmetics
Straight out of the Bay, home of the queers, and, ummm... the Oak Athletics.
It's not your fault that yous from Oak-town, but you'll get your just desserts
You can't catch me, I'm the Gingerbread Man! Sorry, dawg....DaTruth Hurts.

peace.

^And yes, San Francisco has a large Fag Population, but not Oakland.. it's too ghetto

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ok hittin it up... truth, i liked some of your shit, the way you used his name for wordplay was pretty hot, your punches werent that bad, same with vocab, it was a good verse overall. i think gingerbread's was a little better though, he did lots of personals on different aspects, and his vocab seemed a little more elevated. gingerbread you gotta work on closers a little more though..truth did get you on that one. still,

vote- gingerbread

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DAMNIT make an edit function i fuckin swear, looks like im freepostin..anyways i forgot to say please return the fave on the battle in my sig

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Lmao.. Ya'll Don't No How To Vote.. I Thought That I Had This Hands Down.. I Actually Had Punchlines.. As Far As Vocab, I Don't See One Scholarly Word.. What Are You Speakingt Of.. Your Opinion Tho

upping for votes.. real ones

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Tight battle...both had good punches but gingerbread overplayed the gay shit, which is somethin that i cant stand to see..im givin this one to da truth..return the favor in my sig

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da truth:U Couldn't drop no "Smart Shit" if it came out the ass of Einstien
My Shine Blinds Guys, point a knife at yo head, stab yo Mind's Eye

Ging:I'm set to flip the script on you, like a metaphoric giant
Rapin' fronters in the dome like the lyrical Kobe Bryant

favorite lines byu yall

but overall i have to give it to gingerbread cause he gave a good effort in this battle

holla

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