ya flow stink like teeth thats rotten
got the master mind plotting
how to turn ya text-written, to tolet tissue with shit stains spottin
i rather put my hands on a glock
while u rather put ya hands on u'r cock
and strach N itch,
plus u'r punch-lines feels like a slap from a bitch
u aint much to handle, like acrobatics u bound to flip
make u look up and slap down ya lips
watch u cry then ask if u like how it felt
right befor i blast the metal from ya belt
take ya walet N piss on ya face N call the feeds
cuz u'r career like powder with no water expecting to make breed
and i'll chop off ya neck to help u come off the top
its like a yellow light my bullets wont stop
till ya face look all blue like unifor for cop's

BITCH

not bad... think ur punches need some work... but overall some decent shit here.
think u dissed him decently.
go hit my first shit up... in opem mic forum.

yea you need to work on some harder punches....but I was feelin ya flow on this one.