10-20 lines
No d/r, hate, or crew votes..wait..no crew would let you in so nevermind
Due 25 min after checkin
You Spit first

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first off u drink 2 much haterade
u dick ridin faget u just mad dat im paid
how u gone diss dawg ur real names ian
and your nobodies daddy u dont get women
and there only 1 thing i kan JUSTIFY
my ryhmes r as strong as onoins n it'll make u cry
u called me a niggelet wut r u KKK
it dont matter i bet u as fat as albert so HEY HEY HEY
n stay in ya place kuz dawg u 2 weak
guess wut he plyed save by da bell da guys skreech
ya geek i cant believe u even tried 2 contest
he figure he could see kuz his eyes as big as Double D breast

HIS AIM NAME IS IANSYODADDY
AND HE CALLED ME A NIGGALET IN MY BATTLE
AGAINST FORGOTTEN FLOW

PLEASE VOTE

AMAYZE VS FORGOTTEN FLOW
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

Yo kid, you're just a fake ass emcee
There's nothin you can spit that'll amaze me
All these members intoxicatin you with lies
Your lame son...i know this may come as a surprise
In your last battle, you didnt even know how to check in
but you figured it out..must be that womens intuition
A win for you would be totally erroneous
Look at you're drop with forgotten..itll justify this
You cant even spell right you illiterate-son-of-a-bitch
I guess ya momma forgot to buy you hooked-on-phonics
No, I was wrong there is one thing that amazed me
That you even showed up to this battle against me
I'm lyrically insane son, you should know better
Look at ya sheets...you a fuckin bed wetter
I guess ya mom forgot to potty train ya too
Is there anything that worthless sack of shit can do?
i'll end this now before i embarass ya anymore
I got this battle wrapped up for sure

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vote justify.....

amayze... to basic...
punches, if we can call them that, werent witty or set up nice,
not alot of good disses, flow was ok structure was decent, but.
it wasnt a hard verse. no good personals really.

justify.
at least ur verse contained disses, some attempted punches,
structure and flow were good, just try to be creative with wordplay n shit,
no good personals either....most of it was made up, mother jokes and such.

decent battle, just just came better.
vote -j

oh and hit this up please

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136173

thanks and i forgot to post you must have 50 posts or more to vote so total newbs cant come in and dick ride

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yo aight look

vocab:just
mulits:just
creativity:amayze

vote:just

better

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Dog....amaze ur shit wwas horrible. You shit was shit. I hate ur rhymes...period. They were like, Dr. Suess gone bad. Vanillia Ice needs a new carrer. Holla.
My Vote= Just

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you try to spit hot lines but ya computer freezes/
my flows is picture perfect so no need for "cheezes"/

---Ohhh, and ya welcome....4 what?.....The free sample.

Open Battles
-none 4 now-

amayze
structure is ok...ur lines started to get stretched towards the end though...flow fell off cause of the stretchness at the end...no multis...wordplay was wack...a few of ur punches barely connected...no good personals...

Justify
structure is good...flow is on target...u had some nice multis...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personal...Justify had the better overall structure...he also had the better flow...he had more multis...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Justify gets my vote...

VOTE - JUSTIFY

PLEASE return the favor with an honest on the link in my sig against bullethole...thanx...

drop a vote on this...need 1 more HONEST vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136294

aiyo fuk ya'll battle...justify merked him, no more to say *dont want it to get DQ'ed, so...justify's oper killed amayze's whole damn flow...his closer was on hit, and his metas were talented...rhyming wise:anybody can mix 'haterade' and 'paid' together, its just how u mixed it that made it garbage(amayze)

v/justify

Justify took it with disses and punches that came kinda hard. Amayzes shit was kinda borin. But he did have that fat albert line that had me weak. But overall Justify takes it with better punches that were hittin amayze hard.

Vote-Justify

Vote on these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136079

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135031

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open: neither...haterade couldnt be more played and the other one just wasnt good
close: justify...amayze doesnt make sense. justifys wasnt great but it was ok
personals: amayze...he had some and as weak as they were justify really didnt
punches: justify...for sure his made sense and just plain hit harder...womens intuition line had me rollin
flow: justify...way smoother not as many stretched lines needed a little work but overall much better
metas: neither...there werent any


win:justify for funny punches and way better flow

amayze work on flow your verse read noobish to me

\/hit me up\/

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