ok 4 bars, 8 lines due in 15 mins after check-in no dr/hate/crew votes and def. no feeding i dont care who spits first..

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chek

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Souless i found a soul with less laimeness..

Souless i no why u have no soul/
u left it while trying to ryme so it died in the cold/

Wait a minute it ran from u, spittin that whack i'd run too/
Slayin ur flowes left and right,ur souless is scared..BOO! got u worried all night about the flowes im droppin/

Got you in the parkin lot of walmart jumpin around on ur feet and toes/
I guess this nine is fun to fuck with, luvin my rymes and destroyin the inocent/ (the not guilty)

This battle was over b4 the votes started/
i printed ur rymes read and laughed stuck em up my ass and farted, i know im very cold hearted/

gl and give it what u got..........

......newb.....



Yea I read ur old shit…. And all u can do…is end-rhyme
How u supposed to win battles, when u don’t have any punch-lines!!!
Dude you’ll find it ‘hard~to~live’, not Hard-2-lose..
Its..Sad-but-dude, I know autistic kids ‘smarter-than-you’!!!
Go ahead! Keep it gangsta!..Haha man-you-wish…
Save the (50 cent) in your sig to call for ya am~bu~lance!!!!
Fuck… try to be a rapper… I’l let this cat pretend…
But don’t… confuse me for a rook and never call me out again!!!!

..half ass but w/e


….Sonned!!!!!!!!!

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.................aight drop votes................................

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ok. this ones pretty clear.

Vote- Souless.
He had better everything. Dont think any one can argue that.
He had wordplay-punches-flo-structure-metiphore's-n-personals'.
Other kid was wak. Elevate. Souless stay audio active. But good job in the text.

-1

soulless has two (L)'s..... haahha... create a new thread and spell my naem right... tehn i will post my verse again in there.......k!!!!!!......

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Soulness takes it with better punches. I got lost on 2h2ls third bar. I dunno what the fuck he said there. Try ta make your lines a little shorter too. Soulness wins this with an overall better flow with punches and a good structure that was easy to follow.

"I never used to snore in my sleep 'til this rap shit started
Warm thoughts fill the hot-headed and cold-hearted
Your whole paycheck, you burp it and then fart it"
-Ludacris_Blow it Out

"This battle was over b4 the votes started/
i printed ur rymes read and laughed stuck em up my ass and farted,
i know im very cold hearted/"
-2h2l

Shit sounds the same ta me....

Vote-Soulness

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Soulless takes this battle hands down on a much higher tip lyrically.

2 Hard you didnt rhyme, I wasnt feelin the flow and you had no punches personals or structure. nuff said.

vote: Soulless

cause ur gonna lose to me ur gonna vote for my rivalry lol dumb bitch