im justa bill sittin on capital hill wit a deal
since 2+2=4 dat mean im fuckin 4real
so just CHILL like MR. FREEZE
cuz ima BIG MAC like miky deez(macdonalds)
garuntee dat girl in 1st period wantin sum of me
to see me KEYS like ALICIA2 open da door 4 felicia
2 my home 2 give me sum knowledge on spanish1ba
i kno math so i don't need a visa 4 a cash exchange
n unlike da scare crow i already got sum brains
made me a name of popularity so everybody stare at me
so im like twista but i made myself n overnite celebrity
heavily i nda mix wit chicks i think is fine
n since im in da newspaper i b blowin dey minds
outta time im neva wit mine cuz im always busy
my life fly by so fast it'll leave yo ass dizzy
4give me if i enjoy my time in highskool
but like LUDACRIS said all i do is ACT A FOOL

yo vote 4 sum of my battles
amayze vs forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

2hard2lose
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487

murda-gram
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506

novakane
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

peace

ay wanna be im my crew? haha rolf...sike

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quote your own damn lyrics...

yo fuck both ya if i wasn'y in 4
battles i wood beat both of ya's
asses

flow was aight i kinda like it
nice job but it might need
a lil more work but keep workin
on it
PIMP OUT

That was a very simplistic verse, nice flow to it/
But there is much more you can do to make it better/
Use better words, and multis in it and you will have a really hott verse man/
Keep elevatin, I give it a 6.5/10 man/

this was a simple but decent flow to it,
ya lines was average above basic
i like how u fliped a few lines
creative was average but all around not bad...

6.5 outta 10 keep droping them

hey also can u drop fedd back on my diss to forgetten flow pt2...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137793

thanks alot man....