5barz(10 lines)
no crew votes
no d/r
you spit first

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aite let me murk ur bitch ass quick, get to a next battle

nigga my productions top charts like Jason Bourne/
i would burn u to ashes but u already been tourn/
i murk a bitch like u from unbroken perfection/
battlin any nigga from ur crew is like an automatic win to my collection/
nigga if ya father a glass maker i buss thru da glass/
and im bout to vote cuz clearly EB bust ur ass/
how da hell u got on dat crew,well i guess u lucked/
but it don matta cuz guess wat ya crew is fucked/
im DJulien bitch i have no fear/
u couldnt see da low tide if i put da waves in ya hair/
ayo i hate ta tell u but ur crews hanging by a thread/
pass da "unbroken" knife so i could amputate ur leg/

10...wackness


I'll come soft on this bitch as i show his 0-1 record new shit
you wanted a quick win but it looks like someone beat you to it
Tourn'll kill ya hype..and make ya hard shit the mistake of this fight
and I couldn't correct the direction of ya punches even if I came right
Your level and your height is like a championship only you have felt
cause every punch i'm throwin is like ya barely losin a title being below the belt
Dude has dirty techniques...thinkin he'll send crews flyin
and i didn't wanan bring em out.........but DJU Lien
The closer wont end with curtains more like white sheets
cause i'm like a sore dick..the way you cant beat me

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uppin for some hoenst votes....i'll return the favor fellas

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hmmm...lets vote you fucks i vote on atleast 4 battles everytime i post up a new battle...so vote

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Tourn vs Kronuz
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V/ goes to Tourn
Punches-Tourn
WOrdplay-Tourn
Flow-Tourn
Personalz-djulien
Feelin-Tourn
(vote me vs. Dynamik "P")

my vote goes to DJ cuz i felt his more and he had da personals and shit..u didnt have that much to it....return da favor EVERYONE~tourn ur shit was good too he beaet u but no by much...IMO

me verse caliph for the second damn time......
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137507

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uppin.........................................for votes

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Tourn vs Femcee
Tourn Vs DJulien

Break Down I

Djulien- Well Your Starting To Get Better, Had A Personal Or 2, Flow Was Ok.. Punches Didnt Hit Very Hard... Strucure Was Better Than Tourns.... Overal Ok Verse

Tourn- Verse Was Ok... Structure Was Alright... Flow Was Ok... Punches Were There.... Overal Ok Verse



Break Down II
Punches- Tourn
Personals- Djulien
Flow- Djulien
Wordplay- Tourn
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Niether
Structure- Djulien
Originality- Tourn
Vocab- Niether

Final Vote- Tourn

Return Favor And Honest Vote On This:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

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my vote is goin to dj
cuz he had some decent personals, and aimed all of dem straight to tourn
also cuz this dude tourn called himself a sore dick and dat was type gay. he jus dissed himself.

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DJulien
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

tourn
structure is ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a little...no multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...good personals...

Overall
DJulien had the better structure...and the more stable flow...neither had multis...both had ok wordplay...tourn had more connecting punches...and better personals...and punches and personals r more important then structure and flow...so basing off of that...tourn gets my vote...

VOTE - TOURN

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...

Djulien- u had a few good Personals ya flow was average but ya punches wasnt as hard as u need it them to be they kinda slacked which hurt u in this battle, but ya verse all around was preety good, 7.0 outta 10

Tourn- u'r verse was better, u'r flow was just above average ya punches was better and more hard hitting and ya lines was more creative which helped also all around ya verse was preety good, 8.0 outta 10

Punches- Tourn
Flow- tourn
creativeness: Tourn
Vote- Tourn

but this battle was close then the brake down looks like....

cmon you fuckin people...lets get this done.......

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