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Ice pick i hope you like this ima bout to blow you up like ur lungs full with nitris
this aint a battle its one sided victory i leave you in the dust now jsut another part a history
That is you and this is me.......i aint even wanna finish ima kick this shit to simpily
you need some help pack yur bags ima take you ta rap school im sure youll find it simple
but the bar gone raised up since im the fuckin princeple
yur anoying thats y ima pop you like a pimple
and i guess thats y yur cutie fell soo deep with my dimples
see im goin out the front wile you comin in the back
its yur house you just afraid a getin smacked
so sit back relax and get used to getin served
Cuz we all seem to be against you yes even each and every word

it's on 'n POPPIN' like eardrums in 747's/
Letty gets kicked and dropped 2 his knees, this cat is beggin/

Battle begins and ends
innocent bystander, fuckin' wit tha verbal Highlander/
ya words got me perturbed, observe i crush ya insignificant banter/
steppin up 2 tha plate, Letty get ready bitch try it/
now u lost control like Police in tha 60's Watts riots/
when shit hits tha fan, U run for ya life//
my first strike is on POINT like venomous spikes/
verbals EAT u like dykes, spread ya blood on a gurney/
pissin' in ya pants, trick u softer than Bert n Ernie/
in satin panties, really, u say u can't stand me/
yet u obsess for 2 months, lil faggot tryna land me!/
unworthy emcees, like this VICtim of my rage/
unload tha gauge and catch 8mm like Nicolas Cage/
i'm sicc, bar for bar u trapped in high water/
they gon' be SCRAPIN' u off walls like bugs after gettin hit by FLY SWATTERS/
i'm hotter, degrees like proof or bacardi alcohol percentages/
and ya boy gon' lose tha rest of his appendages, just cuz u messed wit this!/

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Kid u rote one tru line i cant stand you
you wily cyotee get crushed down like an anvll
im sick a kids repin glocks when they jsut talk shit
ill stare down the barrel of yur 8mm i no you aint shot shit
yur lost rapin with out a topic ur toxic now the gloves off and i lost it
ima thro a left jab to a right hook
ima take a bigger bite outa you than mike took
you aint flow ur a joke no label el ever launch you
i gota lyrical flush the jokers on you
i want two no wait the three count
i no you came outa the closet now the secrets out

your fuckin washed up, you know its the truth kid-
cause like the Yankess when 'babe' died, I’m fuckin 'RUTHless'-
let your blood pour, your skin-tone will be WON-DER spelled backwards-
After I slap you 'round 'till you start acting right, like B movie actors-
Give you a pair of ski’s so you can go out like Sonny's doom-
Cause you don't know who you fuckin with like a Stevie Wonder honeymoon-
You, compete with my iLLite gift?, kid's rebelling without a clue-
My heat scripts "beat you 'till you're sterile", literally beat the "fuck" out of you-

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Okay kid watever you say i aint washed up
im jsut startin 16 and got yur bich in the hot tub
if you wanna talk backwards kid well kick it with redrum
dont worry itl b quick just realize its only goin down cuz you said sumem
i no you aint an mc yur just a kid tryin a be tough
your just wastin yur time you aint gona get a victory to speak of
ima snap yur back past yur ass and use the blood poor to write my raps
what type is that
sadistic thats what you get when you listen to this kid
i wanna get this over with thats y im goin balistic
whens this battle over when you guna realize you just cant win
ima say fuck you ice pick jsut like yur fuckin skellitin
i see yur knees wiggilin with jelitin
i just got on a role now im hotter than a kettle wen
it starts screamin im the deamen creapin threw yur room wile you dreamin
every thing in yur life that you cant explain
after me kid youll never rap again

yo get the fuck back in this battle now yur bitchin out you fuckin loser

DUDE YOU GOT RIPPED UP
I aint even posting no more
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get this battle closed

If you wanna challenge me challenge me

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Based On The 3- 2 Verses.... Lettys First Was The Best.. Ice First Verse Was Decent But His Second Verse Was Sic... I Like That Wonder Line.. props on that...

Punches--- Ice Pick
Personals-- Niether
Flow------- Ice Pick
Metaz------ Letty
Wordplay--- Ice Pick
Structure--- Letty
Originality--- Ice Pick
Creativity--- Ice Pick

Final Vote---- Ice Pick.... Overal Better Verse With Wordplay Punches And Creativity Within The Both.... Letty Came Decent But Not As Good As Ice...

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lol pick' blacklisted me... lol.. oh well.... .peace

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basically this is eay letty shit aint rhyme this is a fuccking rap battle not poetry so letty loses plus what he said was trash.icepick shit was alright but he had better days still he aint need much to beat letty

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You got off to a good start but by the end Letty was dry.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399

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