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07-26-04, 04:06 AM | #1 | |
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lost and confused
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Lost and confused
no longer know what to do don’t know what to say I still wake up everyday and realize I’m not with you baby I do still miss you I want u back in my arms so we can laugh together just be together girl I miss you ain’t nothin the same day after day it hurts to know that things had to change it is ok now though because we are now best friends and I can go on with my life feedback plz...leave a link n i'll get back at ya |
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07-26-04, 10:58 PM | #2 | |
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feedback please
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07-28-04, 10:13 PM | #3 | ||
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Yo dat was real. I like da fact dat ur letin ur x know you still love her. keep doin tha damn thing
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07-28-04, 10:40 PM | #4 | ||
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thass nice...keep it up cuz ur good
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07-29-04, 01:04 AM | #5 | |
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ay thanks fa da feed...uppin peace
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07-30-04, 10:19 PM | #6 | |
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feedback plz
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07-31-04, 10:50 AM | #7 | ||
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I dont know about the how complex this was...but, I could definately relate to your words...no mattr how simplistic they seemed...I just went through that with my ex. Nice piece...try to elevate with your words....
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07-31-04, 05:05 PM | #8 | |
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thanks fa da feedback...uppin
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07-31-04, 07:48 PM | #9 | ||
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Word man - I wasn't feelin the depth, but at the same time im goin through that right now. Was goin to do a track very close to this - and am still writing it... Emotion was real dun. Watch for Phenom in Songs, cause i got a track coming like this. Good lookin though
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07-31-04, 10:45 PM | #10 | |
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iight kidd i'll be lookin fa dat...thanks fa the feed...peace
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08-03-04, 12:58 AM | #11 | |
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uppin
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08-03-04, 04:32 PM | #12 | ||
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I'm feelin this...Lyrical Artist
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Yo dawg, thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it..Yooo, I'm feelin ya poem joint though..I guess it's because I can really relate to it cause I felt the same way...I just wanted to say keep being focus and keep writing cause ya lyrics are good..Peace............Lyrical Artist..
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08-03-04, 04:45 PM | #13 | ||
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I feel like u could have went more into depth with puttin more emotion into it....short but i was feeling it....i Could actully relate to it pretty well so i can undersatnd where u coming from, nice
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08-04-04, 02:00 AM | #14 | |
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ay thanks fa da feedback...appreciat it...uppin peace
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08-04-04, 02:55 AM | #15 | ||
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yo mex...you battle..?
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