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07-30-04, 04:22 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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..For The Ladies..
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Hook: If You Not Ready-To Go Steady-But Grl You So Sexy... And I Just Want You.. My Voice Told Me 2 Forget It-But My Pride Wont let It... Cuz Gurl Im Feelin you.. You The Type Make A Kid Want To Jump The Last-Broom.... Love The Way You Pass The LoveLetters In The Class-Room... Just Want You...You Like The Suit...Because you Just Prodia.... The Way You Get The Other Chicks Mad By Walkin Me 2 My locker... You The Type Make Me Turn In Playa Card...L.O.V.E In My Heart... The Way We Stay On The Phone All Night Till the Time School Starts.... Simple Things That You Do..Like Walkin 2 Gether And Holding Hands... Go Back Tell All Your Friends...That I Aient Like No Other Man... No Other Girls Better...Nobody Comes Near You Wouldnt Let Her... Can It Be Me And You Together....For Ever Always..Always For Ever.. Hook: If You Not Ready-To Go Steady-But Grl You So Sexy... And I Just Want You.. My Voice Told Me 2 Forget It-But My Pride Wont let It... Cuz Gurl Im Feelin you.. Hear The Door Open...Just Cant Wait To See Your S/n Sign On.... Miss You When You Gone-Not Perfect But For You Try Not To Do Wrong.. Think About You When I Wake Up Till I Go To Bed At Night..You In My dreams. RelationShip Seen...When My Cell Rings..Hopin Yo Name Be On The Called ID.. Make You fly Clean..Roses And Dime-Ins..We On that Bonny And Clyde Thing.. Tell me You Love Me Every Five Miniutes on The Phone... tell me You Miss Me Every Five Minuites When You Away From Home.. Buy You Jewlry..Give You the World If I was The god Rulingly.... Love When You talk About If you was With Me what You A Do 2 Me.. Forget About What Every Body Else Thinks..Its Just You And Me... Hook: If You Not Ready-To Go Steady-But Grl You So Sexy... And I Just Want You.. My Voice Told Me 2 Forget It-But My Pride Wont let It... Cuz Gurl Im Feelin you.. (Im Givin Up) All The Childish Days..Puttin Away My Games... (Im Givin Up) Out Of My Phone Book The Other grls I Delete They Name... (Im Givin Up) The So called Pimpness..Both of Our Dreams.. Life We Livin.. (Im Givin Up) Playa Stuff Is Ending..Me And You is the New Beginning.. Hook: If You Not Ready-To Go Steady-But Grl You So Sexy... And I Just Want You.. My Voice Told Me 2 Forget It-But My Pride Wont let It... Cuz Gurl Im Feelin you.. Phone Rings To Be Contuined...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138486
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07-30-04, 04:32 PM
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Cypher King. True Story.
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Hot drop, Pro. Rhyme scheme was on point, Subject matter stayed consistent, Flow was proper, not too much wordplay or meta's, but it's still dope. The verses were opened and closed well, which is something alot of emcees leave out. The chorus may need a little bit of polishing, but other than that, hot shit all around. Keep dropping shit like this.
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07-30-04, 04:41 PM
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New to RB
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cmon lady cop cmon and frisky me/i know its risky, and if yah dont/ i'll know you'll miss me/ turn in your badge and show us your snatch but first get rid of that bloody maxi pad, god dang gurl you got a hairy patch/ lookin like a sasquatch which your hairy crouch/okay/ /okay/ let me change the subject /i aint done yet/ i rep everything but the bling bling cuz i cant afford a thing, no fur no mink but its aight me styles still tight!
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07-30-04, 05:06 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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Aight Thanx
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07-30-04, 06:02 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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Uppin For Votes..
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07-30-04, 07:15 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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Uppin,...For feedback
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07-30-04, 07:22 PM
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Thank You, Come Again
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nice piece but too lnog to read...reutrn the fav on mine...butyou did ag good job....
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07-30-04, 07:41 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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Aight Thanx....Upp
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07-30-04, 07:44 PM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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Keep dropin dat hot shit cuz
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07-30-04, 07:53 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP:
Thanx Playa..
upp..
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07-30-04, 09:32 PM
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COLD
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that was ok but it wasnt hot it was kinda young like some little bow wow shit but it was alright
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07-31-04, 12:07 AM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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^^ Wtf
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07-31-04, 12:15 AM
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The Light
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that dont mean it waset hot.. good job pol.. you cant skip the "lil bow wow" years.. so dont try to act liek you went from sucking thumbs to payin bills.. Nice peice
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07-31-04, 06:06 AM
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Odi et Amo
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As i said in ya sequal, very nice piece, ppl can relate to this stuff (me)...Hot!
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07-31-04, 02:04 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP:
Thanx Upp...
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