Topic: Someone breaks into your house. Talk about what happens.
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Check in by: 08-04-04 at 11:47 AM

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Tha Q has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 11:47 AM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 11:50 AM.

It was 11:48..I was in bed with this chick..
I was watching a flick..while she was slobbin' my dick..
Then, I heard a window burst..sounded close to the kitchen..
"Oh my God, what was that!?!".."Hol up broad, stop trippin"..
Quickly I leaped from the bed..grabbed my gat but I was shook..
"You wait here for one minute while I go downstairs to look"..
I tried to tip-toe real slick..but the steps started squeakin'..
Then, half-way down the stairs..I heard noise where the kitchen sink is..
I couldn't believe it..I cocked my .38 and pointed straight..
When I got to the bottom..I saw a shadow across the drapes..
My heart raced like fast-forward tape..my breath had its own rhythm..
As I edge around the corner..I wondered if I could even hit him..
"Who's there? Come out now."..I tried to give this dude a warning..
But, I heard not a peep..like this creep was tryin' to ignore me..
Slowly, I inched closer to the door..I heard a pot hit the floor..
"Oh my Lord", the chic screamed out the door..but I pressed on..
I stood an inch away from the room..ready to burst in an shoot..
Then I thought, maybe I should just fire a warning shot into the roof..
I decided against it..then built up courage to face this Jack..
When I finally turned the corner..I saw that it was a stray cat..

I burst out laughing...


THE END

Suddenly awakened by sound of breaking glass
Shakin', adrenaline starts pumpin' real fast
"What was dat" I asked, brother looked deshoveled
Stepped into hall to my mother lookin' equally puzzled
Askin' same question as me, Shit!! I gotta think
I know either we are being robbed or all need shrinks
"SHHH!!! ma' quiet down" I said and grabbed my bat
Didn't know what broke window, but its head I was gon crack
Tipped toed down steps, got my head on the swivel
Glass on the floor still no answer to riddle
Then I notice something movin' with my peripheral
My biggest fear went from suspicion to literal
Out popped a masked man, I instintively swung
Saw a flash, then fell and felt a pain in my belly that stung
Looked down, my T shirt's red, I thought I was dead
But he didn't finish me, jus ran out as I bleed
Mother ran down steps, " OMG!!!!" she screamed
Death for me was inevitable it seemed
Blacked out, woke up to bright lights, I was thru
Nope jus celing lights in hospital, next time I'd be packin too

I gotta say he won this battle ebcause i think his just was more like reality...i just like it nice overall

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Voted For: Tha Q

Q- Was Feelin Yours, Made Me Laugh At The End When It Was A Cat, Good Discriptions, Flowed Good, And Was Easy To Vision....

Triple N- Was Also Feelin Yours, The Endin Made Me Laugh Aswell, I Liked Q's Better, He Was More Discriptive And Made It Easier To Vision, Your Flow Was Good Too, But Overal I Liked The Q's Better...

Final Vote - The Q....

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Voted For: Tha Q

Tha Q wins this battle in my opinion.The topic is average and both emcees made good spits.Why Tha Q wins is cause of this:He had pretty elementary rhyming pattern but the way he phrased everything and I liked the ending about it just being a stray cat.He also had quite a bit of dialogue in his conpared to about 2 lines of speaking in Triple N's.Triple had pretty good flow but his structure wasnt the greatest.Triple had better punches but there was only 2 or 3 in the whole verse.So thats why I think Tha Q wins.

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^^ word...preciate the honesty bro


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yo ima give this one to triple n by a mila meter,
q shit was hot wit the ending props son...but n had me at the ending too..
wordplay and everyhthing was fire for both yall..structure good..metas all on point...storyies was both tight..but i give it to triple n

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BOSTON LYRICIST

damn this was a good battle both good flow both epually good storys both ill drops q gets it cuz he won in the only area they didnt evenly match in vocab and q took that

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AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?

ive already posted my vote i forgot to poll it though

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BOSTON LYRICIST

^^ well...two votes that didn't register


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