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Indisputable principle, attaching pain that's afflictable Cause it's lyrically critical for my words to be cynical For my rhymes to record the many evils of humanity And to expose their pivital and spiritual blasphemy My pen will continue to bleed the pure essence of life It can forever deny God and the presence of Christ I'll swallow the alphabet and spit out a dictionary My dictions vary, from being a warrior to a visionary My friend, have you heard the word of a god absurd? And the then commandments that an elder observed? Paranoid, I'm constantly aware that god is watching me But I watch back, dropping sleep in search of prophecy Are horrible incidents of man going to remain historical? Be very silent because that question will stay rhetorical It's definetely not affordable to lose that evil knowledge So I read the carnage and with words, I pay homage I learn things about a virus, war, and blood splatters But I still can't find a book that tells me love matters I will devote myself to writing down the most truthful words Almost losing god and spitting in the ignorant face of lucifer
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IP:
Well, this definately had a lot of multies...Sometimes it seemed force and I wish your vocab may of came a little stronger but, all in all this was nice. I liked your format and your structure....keep it real...
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IP:
ya...dis was a nice drop kidd....it had a hell of alot of multies in dat...like dat last line 2...dat was ill...peace
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IP:
that was offical sun fo sho.good wordplay and vocab and i like the thoughts till i found Islam i felt the same shit dogg and i understand the spitual struggle a nigga go through .good shit
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Damn You Good Nice Drop Therer Nice Poem I Give You A 9/10
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