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Old 08-02-04, 10:02 PM   #1
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Collaboration - Triple_N, Kingz, Calamity

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139286
ROFL about wrong link... thats right one
^Luv and War song.. Recorded by us.. hot, check it..


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Old 08-02-04, 10:28 PM   #2
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LMAO.....Wrong link dumbass....I'll edit this with my thoughts when I finally find the right thread......ROFL!!!!!
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Old 08-02-04, 10:34 PM   #3
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ROFL.. i fixed it -_-.. im sleep deprived hoe leave me alone
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Old 08-02-04, 10:38 PM   #4
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Nice drop......I liked it

Triple_N - I don't know what it is about your voice, but it just doesn't seem to click. I dunno.....Lyrics were tight but I have to agree with LoT/Crossword, I really don't think that you should have used that kind of voice for the chorus

Kingz - Flow was pretty choppy at first. You had OK lyrics, but nothing to special. Are you from England? Cause I really have a hard time making out the accent, I just don't hear it. Flow picked up a little better in the middle and was more enjoyable after the first 15 - 20 secs....

Calamity - I honestly thought you had the best verse of all three. I liked the lyrics and you seemed to stay on flow the whole way through. The only problem I heard with your verse was I think your vocals needed to be turned up a bit.....just a little. Everyone else was easy to hear over the beat, but for you I had to turn my volume up a little.....

Overall............ (two thumbs up)
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Old 08-02-04, 10:40 PM   #5
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thanks ^.. im working on get a mic to fit my voice.. righ tno wim jammin on the mic carson got
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Old 08-02-04, 10:47 PM   #6
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I jam on a $8.95 mic with a sock over it.....LMAO
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Old 08-02-04, 10:52 PM   #7
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LMAO are yous erious.. you ghettoer than me and im BLACK..
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Old 08-02-04, 11:05 PM   #8
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.......umm.........NO, I wasn't serious

*throw piece of shit mic away*


















































*retrieves piece of shit mic from trash cause it's all he's got*
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Old 08-02-04, 11:16 PM   #9
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Yeah, actually that is what I use. I go kids and shit....I can't be spendin money on real shit.


P.S......it sounds like I say the N word in there somewhere.....just so you know, it wasn't .....would've been a dope personal though



*goes to listen to song again*
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Old 08-03-04, 04:09 AM   #10
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shouldnt this be posted in songs forum?
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Old 08-03-04, 04:23 AM   #11
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yea...but you can post ne thing in here..plus,it''' show these people that the audio forum really does exist
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Old 08-03-04, 05:52 AM   #12
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lmao at the audio forums dead-ism.... an enigmas mic... hahaha...

but about the track:
I agree wit everyone about triple Ns voice... sounded pretty put on, n ya end of line emphasis was in that same wierd voice as the chorus... but the rest was aigght i thought..

voice was quieter than triples... flow was kinda stop n start... didnt fall off though, n it smoothed out by the end... and lmao at whoever did that "spoiled me" line...

calam... voice was even quieter still.. nice flow... cept ya emphasis..es? ... emphasi?? I thought were a little too SFXed.. ya used a heavy reverb or somethin...

ya all had nice lyrics

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