Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

No pre writtens either, like if i see your verse posted withini 2 or 3 minutes of this being posted YOU WILL BE EXPOSED

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-05-04 at 02:04 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

What if I'm just that nice -- I still get disqualified -- that's crazy! 5 minutes max right!

Barz&Penstripes has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:46 PM.

Icepick!? More like thumbtack or sewing needle/
You're rhymes are jacked and dead like dude who lived aboved the Reagle Beagle/
See I speak reality throwing potent shots/
You speak fantasy like 900 #s and I robot/
Step into the real world posing as Jason/
Wearing mask to hide lies behind the rhymes ur saying/
Patience? I have none but it's almost over/
This battle was a rocky horror like Dame losing Hova

One
Is that under 5 minutes

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-04 01:56 PM.

I took 9 minutes for those bars -- Crazy! I knew I shouldn't have been eating these cookies and drinking this milk! lol

I wonder how long this kid is going to take?! hmmmm..

Stripess writin verses at CHURCH....PRAYIN ta GOD to send you some hope.....
but PENSION is BROKE....cuz ya homies cant even AFFORD to LEND you a vote~
Punches direct at ya throat...and like a REBELLIOUS CHILD u jus CANT STOP ME....
You just the OBJECT OF INFLICTION....like the JAPANESE at NAGASAKI~
The TOP 3.....cuz like O.J SIMPSON Ice already MADE THE CUT....
You aint a HEAVYWEIGHT RAPPER...cuz like stripes he just DONT WEIGH ENOUGH~
The WEIGHT IS TOUGH....and like OPRAH WINFREYS WAISTLINE STRIPESs has LOST IT.....
This WIGGERS GETTIN HIS ASS KICKED....like DISSIN LARRY BIRD IN BOSTON~(
ICe Causin....UPSET STOMACHES like an OVERDOSE ON PRUNES....
Cuz my punches are TOO HOT....like wearin WINTER COATS IN JUNE~

Voted For: Ice Pick

ice had this nice verse for 20 min..some lines kinda LOST ME but overall you had punches flow n more complexity...stripes i wouldnt be so cocky in the future..bout that 5 min crap,you did't really have anything interesting in your verse..
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Yo! He called me a wigger and I'm Black & Puerto Rican! Holy Moly! lol! Nice research! lmao! Cream puff! lol! haaaaaaaaaaa!

Dude Like I Fuckin Knew That

Its A Battle Son And I Aint Researchin Shit

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especially with a time limit of 20 minits..what research is possible???ice your lucky you dint get dq'd you took exactly 20 min..cuttin it kinda close don't ya think...lol..good battle guys..

NO the fuckin system is not letting me post properly, i tried posting this 2 times already and it aint working,,,,,

THIS BETTER FUCKING GO THROUGH

I TRIED BATTLIN SIN AND THE SAME THING HAPPENED AND I GOT THE L FOR IT , AND I DIDNT EVEN GET TO DROP MY VERSE

this new battle system fucking sucks dick

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Yo! it's cool man! Keep doing what you do! Thankx for your honest opinions! lol!

Peace

I'd vote but it'd be biased since Barz and me is cool and shyt so omma just drop some feedback:

Stripess writin verses at CHURCH....PRAYIN ta GOD to send you some hope.....
but PENSION is BROKE....cuz ya homies cant even AFFORD to LEND you a vote~

Weak opener... 2nd line threw me... what's pension got to do with anything?

Punches direct at ya throat...and like a REBELLIOUS CHILD u jus CANT STOP ME....
You just the OBJECT OF INFLICTION....like the JAPANESE at NAGASAKI~

Better bar but the first line was played and weak... good finish though... never heard that one before

The TOP 3.....cuz like O.J SIMPSON Ice already MADE THE CUT....
You aint a HEAVYWEIGHT RAPPER...cuz like stripes he just DONT WEIGH ENOUGH~

1st line=self-glorification and not feeling the 2nd line... played wording... lol@stripes don't weigh enough

The WEIGHT IS TOUGH....and like OPRAH WINFREYS WAISTLINE STRIPESs has LOST IT.....
This WIGGERS GETTIN HIS ASS KICKED....like DISSIN LARRY BIRD IN BOSTON~(

too many references to weight... Oprah lines are played...so is the Larry Bird line...

ICe Causin....UPSET STOMACHES like an OVERDOSE ON PRUNES....
Cuz my punches are TOO HOT....like wearin WINTER COATS IN JUNE~

Weakest line in ya verse... closer was played about 10 years ago... ok structure overall... build on ya vocab no real punches that stuck... personals were obsolete...

Icepick!? More like thumbtack or sewing needle/
You're rhymes are jacked and dead like dude who lived aboved the Reagle Beagle/

you my boy and all but this line was stretched all to hell...lol
i like the originality, though...good opener... just shorten it somehow to fit

See I speak reality throwing potent shots/
You speak fantasy like 900 #s and I robot/

good use of current events but no real punch

Step into the real world posing as Jason/
Wearing mask to hide lies behind the rhymes ur saying/

didn't like this one too much... I know you can come a lot better than that... stop playing around.

Patience? I have none but it's almost over/
This battle was a rocky horror like Dame losing Hova

good closer... originality gets points

Barz... in text it's all about the structure and how easy it is for others to read ya flow... stop thinking audio.. I know... that's what we're used to...but text is different.

It was an ok battle ... can't say who won... sorry!
*This was just to let you all know that me and my boy let each other know when we fuck up a verse... that's how we stay on top of our game. If dude woulda smoked him... trust me, I woulda said so...and vise versa... but... I can't vote on this!*