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Lonely Dreams, Selfish Nightmares
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Nightmares haunted the man's sleep,woke up in cold sweats
Countless nights under the sheets,but he couldnt sleep yet. Every night,he relived that day,that evil man's face It will never go away, nothin can take it's place When his wife was raped, and his kids was sliced in half Blood bath, he'll never forget that ominous laugh Slaughtered like cows and calfs,and for what reason? Cause some sick man was jealous of the family's season When they had fun and played,happiness was amongst And the married couple haven't had a fight in months So the lonely husband conteplated, on getting his revenge Concetrated on, the best way to get even For years he search for the killer, with no luck Until one day, he spotted a familar truck Dumped in the lake, to hide any evidence Although it was useless to cops, to him it served great revelence With the rope tied, he pulled the vehicle out of the drink Checked the large pick up, to anything that will link he life theft, finally, he'll be off the streets He found it!, the weight on his heart was lifted As he looked in the sun visor after he turned and flipped it The final peice to the puzzle, as he glanced at the mirror Vengence was his, now that he knew the identity of the killer That same night,he walked upped the path to a dark house Kicked open the door,with a vengful smirk on his mouth Walked up stairs,to the room where he assumed the man resided 1 gun shot ended it all......... ...............he commited suicide. After looking in the mirror, the man found out who the man was that killed his family. It was himself, in a envious rage of his divorce to his wife. After losing custody to his kids. And seeing them being raised by another man. He decided since he could not have them, no one else will. He ended his lonely dreams. His selfish nightmares.
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Read Rules.
One open mic per day Closed. I'll open this tommorow.
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you dumb ass baboon. it says in your rules 2 open mics per day. wow, your little power trip is making you look more like an idiot than you really are.
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I didnt open the other you dumb ass.
it was already made along time ago. boy, you are dumb as shit!
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Does it moron?
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You May Post One Open Mic Piece Per Day.
One Collab Will Also Be Accepted...But If You Have Too Many, You're Goin Down, Hoecake. Any Other Threads You Create Will Be Closed you fucking blind shit...
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2.You can only make 2 open mics a day because of these ruff tuff morons i see around making 10 opens mics per day
thats in your "important notice' thread. now who's the blindshit. since there is two different rules, I choose the rules I want to follow. bitch.
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yeah, you better had re-opened it.
you jackass.
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kyro, your a crybaby, wanna battle, and i will annoy if you dont
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^HELL NAH
YOU WOULD MERK ME WITH YOUR MERE PRESENCE. Uppin.
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& auctually i dint have to re-open this i just did so you would shut up.
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yo son that was hot son 4real and i feel that u got real deep son that flow was sick the lyricks was fire keep doing ya danm thing
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uppin for some more feedback
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nice shit yo
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word.
this was some "nice shit, yo" wasnt it? upping.
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