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08-12-04, 12:24 AM
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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"This Diss" Freestyle
IP:
Thsi is a freestyle check it out i made it on this one guy i dont think i need to tell him yer name. ight check this shit out. and i rap it to the beat rap game by d12
I rap with the maddest fast speed/ I don’t do it all just for my own greed/. So when I hit you with this diss you will be the one that bleeds/ So ill be sayin yer done with this diss and ill be feedin/. You with all of this to your face and I never miss/ So don’t ever tell me to say it with a greater hiss/. Or I will make the longer remix to this/ So im gonna just go for a few sec and take a 10 second piss/. At yer mutha fucken gay ass place/ So you betta sut up and you betta be makin space/. |
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08-12-04, 12:26 AM
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#2
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
U P P I N
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08-12-04, 01:12 AM
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#3
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
its kinda chesy tho lol haha but its freestyle from me
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08-12-04, 01:45 AM
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#4
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Middle Weight
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IP:
not bad well let me drop this piece right here
Got bazaar splendor like a bartender add a glad dash Of brandy keep my cash handy but duck the sad trash Sugar cums in layer like a plumb player with girl squeeze Waist and seize lace even make bees chase and twirl these Honeycombs, rip apart freaks and mark with streaks of chalk Intertwine with winter wines come out drunk too weak to walk |
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08-12-04, 01:34 AM
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#5
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That's Right...I'm White
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IP:
kinda short, don't really think it should be a open mic,
should be freestyle cypher if there is one, anywho it was alright for the most part, rhymes were kinda basic vocab coulda been better flow was good for the most part to be honest, it coulda been better but as you said, it was a freestyle so not much i can really say props peace |
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08-12-04, 01:40 AM
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#6
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
thanks ya i didnt think it was great eather i just thought how about lets see if they like it lol
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08-12-04, 04:31 AM
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#7
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
if that was freestyle that was rank man i mean rank as in alright this is what i give you.
k i was rappin this to i smell pussy goin fast and this is what i give you flow 6/10 wordplay but you used kinda cheesy word 6/10 punches 4/10 overall 5 1/2 |
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08-12-04, 06:22 AM
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#8
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
this diss sucked
4/10 |
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08-12-04, 08:56 AM
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#9
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
haha you keep given me 4 and the last song i made was 4 and it was better so what is it then?
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08-12-04, 10:01 AM
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#10
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
U P P I N
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08-13-04, 01:05 AM
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#11
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
shit was iite i have seen better
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08-13-04, 02:21 AM
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#12
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~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP:
ya same man im not the best but man its freestyle still by a guy who just atarted spitin rhymes like 2 and a half weaks ago lol and gettin better everyday in like 1 month i bet i will have more wins then losses
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