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Check in by: 08-17-04 at 04:01 AM

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One-Man-Band has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 04:04 AM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 04:04 AM.

BEFORE U READ

www.soundclick.com/triplen
^^^
listen to the track "luv and war" to get some of my punches.. listen to some other shit if u want too..



let me tell you the truth, before this gets outta hand, dude.
see, all the newbs, n' half the vets here.... hardly understand you!

of course ya losin'.. ya raps beyond confusing, I rip flash fast n' hurt you
Vocabs wack... And that track "luv and war" sounds like a wazzaap commercial!
band'll burn you.. punches leavin ya "black eyed", rip reps this vets "gettin started"
ya texts is wack... n' all ya soundclicks sound like remixes of "lets get retarted"!!
ya can't say i'm lyin'.. you claim ya verses bring original, exotic n' tropical things
true... that's why our lab's still tryin' a figure out what ya topicals mean!!
ya drops are obscene.. even if i go so low as to spit a gay joke I dont think this fucker'll last
theyve "resolved their issues" now, but for a minute there, he didnt have Qs cock stuck up his ass
once i grip my techs, i'll rip ya neck from ya chest, so don't act hard around me
you'd get beat over "160 times a minute", just like the way your heart is sounding
my drops astounding ...and just for steppin to me, ill rip you badly homo
bitch ya ass is loco...stay around, ill have ya 'C-in-red'...just like 'Cincinatti logos'
should have no showed, cos like "african soccer fans" bands leavin ya wrecked n' ya "black balled"
yo man check it, its rap war! and ill have this cat "MIA" ... like instant messengers backwards!!**
kid youre done, ive already fucked you up, but i aint finished, prepare to run, g
ill drop ya ass like 'europian painted fans' .... 'youre face's "wear" da RugBe'

My flows got me ahead of this loop, and my madd punches show how we veterans bruise
On chat ya tellin me im nobody... But then you always sayin that nobody's better than you!!


**case ya didnt know .. MIA = Missing In Action, they use it in wars... and AIM is IM... word...

one

Ah'ight here we go!!!!

To cover up strecthed lines u make ya lines finer than hair strands
Ya structure's more strecthed than a fatman's underwear band
Your coveted flow is just like towels in a popular broth
Your personals are holiday sales, always 50 percent off
All of your punches are like michael jackson's career, spent!!
Ya multi's could be a bum wit full change cup & still not make cents(sense)
This ugly homo in denial couldn't get yoda fuck for dolo
Dats why he's onemanband cuz he's a sexual han solo(hand solo)
He frequently secretly attends men's night at gay clubs
I mean his avatar proves dat he loves to bone thugs


Explanations:.....a broth is a bath house, its a place wit a steam room dat people go to too sweat off excess fluids and body toxians
...........Dolo is a ny slang word for money
.........Yoda is the little green man that has starring role in star wars,
........Han solo is a leading man in star wars 1 or 2 forgot which 1 specifically
..........Closer is in reference too he has krazy bone from bone thugs in harmony in his avatar

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Ah'ight here we go!!!!

To cover up strecthed lines u make ya lines finer than hair strands
Ya structure's more strecthed than a fatman's underwear band
Your coveted flow is just like towels in a popular broth
Your personals are holiday sales, always 50 percent off
All of your punches are like michael jackson's career, spent!!
Ya multi's could be a bum wit full change cup & still not make cents(sense)
This ugly homo in denial couldn't get yoda fuck for dolo
Dats why he's onemanband cuz he's a sexual han solo(hand solo)
He frequently secretly attends men's night at gay clubs
I mean his avatar proves dat he loves to bone thugs


Explanations:.....a broth is a bath house, its a place wit a steam room dat people got to too sweat off excess fluids and body toxians

.........Yoda is the little green man that has starring role in star wars,
........Han solo is a leading man in star wars 1 or 2 forgot which 1 specifically
..........Closer is in reference too he has krazy bone from bone thugs in harmony in his avatar

Oh shit!!! my bad y'all I posted in the wrong box the 1st time round

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Voted For: Triple_N

Nice Battle, Triple N Was Straight And To The Point, One Man Bad Had Nice Personals

Punches- Triple N
Personals- One Man Band
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- One Man Band
Metaphors- Triple N
Structure- Triple N
Originality- Tie

It Was Close, But I Didnt Like One Man Bands Structure, He GOt Personals And Wordplay, But Triple Had Punches Metaphors And Better Structure

Final Vote- Triple N

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Voted For: Triple_N

iight,

one: iight one!! your shyt was like hella strectched... u should really practice on that.. You had hella personals but ur shyt was still pretty played... You had nice vocab, good personals but not dat good punches ibelieve.. but ur shyt was pretty Good

Trip: lmao... ur shyt was good, pretty hott punches also.. yours was also pretty streched but not compared to ones lol..also u had hella meta's lmao.. yoda, han solo bone thugs... pretty hott.. lol but hey!! I like bone thugs lol...

punch: trip
personals: one
flow: trip
spit: trip
structure: trip

vote: trip

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-_- ... damn... sif my structure stretched though... might look it, but try to rap it... flows dope

uppin

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Voted For: Triple_N

Close Match But Triple N Takes It

Triple Had the Nice Multies and Structure was Good
and Had Nice Good Punches But mainly Non was weak
But It was aight Though but

8.8/10

One Man Band-Your Lines was Stretched Which made It
hard to Read But You had some Nice punches But your structure Knocked off ya Flow and made some Punches Useless But Overall Good Punches

7.5/10

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Uppin for honest explained votes...favors will be returned just drop links

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Voted For: Triple_N

One-Man-Band: this was ur challenge, ur structure was off a lil' well i can't lie just off, but u had decent wordplay, the best was prolly-
yo man check it, its rap war! and ill have this cat "MIA" ... like instant messengers backwards!!**
^that was nice but the AIM thing didn't do much.. ur verse was nice but just a diss on his audio which didn't hit too hard.. the beginner wasn't bad you know.. but u had more multis but they coulda been done better, u dropped hard but the closer.. oh my god i'm tired of explainin'.. my eyes hurt! Basically, One-Man-Band, u coulda done better you had a good start but fell off and real hard the closer killed you..
6/10 for ur effort... i expected mo' from u than this!

Triple_N: only 10 lines but every line had it's own thing goin'n' and they all hit hard.. word play was sic- especially the end.. the bone thugs part and the han solo and yoda was very original, it's funny cuz nowhere in ur verse did u lose ur flow.. everything stayed on point, best lines were:
He frequently secretly attends men's night at gay clubs
I mean his avatar proves dat he loves to bone thugs
^ brilliant very nice, really.. structure was str8, vocab was aight too (broth) not bad.. the closer completed my decision, i can't lie and say this was a close battle cuz i wasn't u had the shorter verse but u delivered more direct punches than his and got personal at the same time, One-Man-Band not bad either, u just have stuff u might wanna work on- personals are nice if u can tie in the punches with it.. maybe u two should do a re-match, good job.. see ya two not hate either.. but the vote is for:
Triple N- keep doin' ur thing man..

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UUpin for some explained honest votes on this one...

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Voted For: One-Man-Band

let me tell you the truth, before this gets outta hand, dude.
see, all the newbs, n' half the vets here.... hardly understand you!

of course ya losin'.. ya raps beyond confusing, I rip flash fast n' hurt you
Vocabs wack... And that track "luv and war" sounds like a wazzaap commercial!
band'll burn you.. punches leavin ya "black eyed", rip reps this vets "gettin started"
ya texts is wack... n' all ya soundclicks sound like remixes of "lets get retarted"!!
ya can't say i'm lyin'.. you claim ya verses bring original, exotic n' tropical things
true... that's why our lab's still tryin' a figure out what ya topicals mean!!
ya drops are obscene.. even if i go so low as to spit a gay joke I dont think this fucker'll last
theyve "resolved their issues" now, but for a minute there, he didnt have Qs cock stuck up his ass
once i grip my techs, i'll rip ya neck from ya chest, so don't act hard around me
you'd get beat over "160 times a minute", just like the way your heart is sounding
my drops astounding ...and just for steppin to me, ill rip you badly homo
bitch ya ass is loco...stay around, ill have ya 'C-in-red'...just like 'Cincinatti logos'
should have no showed, cos like "african soccer fans" bands leavin ya wrecked n' ya "black balled"
yo man check it, its rap war! and ill have this cat "MIA" ... like instant messengers backwards!!**
kid youre done, ive already fucked you up, but i aint finished, prepare to run, g
ill drop ya ass like 'europian painted fans' .... 'youre face's "wear" da RugBe'

My flows got me ahead of this loop, and my madd punches show how we veterans bruise
On chat ya tellin me im nobody... But then you always sayin that nobody's better than you!!
Punches=7
Meta's=6
Wordplay=8
Enjoyment=7
Complexity=8
Structure=9



To cover up strecthed lines u make ya lines finer than hair strands
Ya structure's more strecthed than a fatman's underwear band
Your coveted flow is just like towels in a popular broth
Your personals are holiday sales, always 50 percent off
All of your punches are like michael jackson's career, spent!!
Ya multi's could be a bum wit full change cup & still not make cents(sense)
This ugly homo in denial couldn't get yoda fuck for dolo
Dats why he's onemanband cuz he's a sexual han solo(hand solo)
He frequently secretly attends men's night at gay clubs
I mean his avatar proves dat he loves to bone thugs
Punches=8
Meta's=7
Wordplay=5
Enjoyment=6
Complexity=6
Structure=8

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