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08-15-04, 03:26 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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Spade Hood.....nice Joint....peap This
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/dacumentmusic.htm
YOU'LL BE HAPPY YOU DID I'M THE SECOND VERSE AND LAST VERSE AND THE HOOK FIRE!!!!!!!!
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08-15-04, 04:24 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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yo sleep on this.....replys
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08-15-04, 04:37 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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YOu say it's new but it's all the way at the bottom of your S-C page
ummm... ur ad libs were kinda annoying...they took away from your flow at a couple spots I like your flow...but i don't like the constant Doubles you got goin on like an echo...use that shit on punches and the ends of some lines... lyrics were decent liked the beat not bad homie 1 |
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08-15-04, 04:43 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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IP:
appreciate it, still loolin for feed back
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08-15-04, 04:54 PM
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Light Weight
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yo first off titeshit...
but ya mic is a lil fucked up but its all good mah shit is fucked up too yo you nice too if you want we can do a collab or somthin holla
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08-15-04, 08:50 PM
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First Verse - Yeah....that fake echo was killing me. Didn't seem like there was any emotion in it either. Flow was Ok......content was blah though...
Second verse - Much better. Nice lyrics and emotion was much better in this verse. Lack effects were nice Third Verse - Wasn't bad.....I'm guessing the two rappers kinda blended the last verse together......keep dropping  Wasn't really feeling the hook though...
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08-19-04, 05:34 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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IP:
good looks, i was second verse but i'll work on the mic yo, but i'm still lookin for feedback
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08-19-04, 06:01 PM
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!!!THA HOODZ BEST!!!
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that shit wazz lame
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08-19-04, 11:28 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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^ lol.... good feed. First verse - nice flow, didnt like all the overdubs either. A little excessive, and waaaaay too loud. 2nd verse - lol - loved the tube socks line. Your flow was aight too dun. Nice lines and overdubs was lessened. Good looks. 3rd. Overdubs like WHOA - be easy. lol. Hook - blah. Overall - not bad, keep droppin.
peep www.soundclick.com/phenominall 1
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09-18-04, 04:35 PM
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ThE UlTimAtE GhOSt WrITeR
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IP:
good looks, yo this joint still poppin....feed back
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09-18-04, 04:59 PM
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The Light
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ehh.. of cource my saint louis peer, jkwons beat was fuckign off the hook.. but....... ya'll quality was ass.......... ya'll was clippin thru the whole hook lol...... work on the productiona lil bit... flow wise.. ya'll fell off a lot to me it sounded.. ya'll was also spittin gangsta but it wassnt liek witty gangsta lol... guy whyo said put a tree on ya face like you stomped by some timbs.. ya punchlines was nice, but in my opinion you coulda delivered better and it woulkd have had a better effect.. this was aiiight... work on the flow and production id say.. keep doin it tho.. -1
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09-18-04, 09:22 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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Leave feedback on other songs, or I'ma have to close this. Since it was already open, and has just been brought back to the top of the page, I'ma leave it - but if I don't see you postin in other songs, it gets closed.
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