Im straight loco with no motives for Breaking ya Back/
Derailing cats, blowing steam while Laying some Tracks/
No bullets, only Sprayin the facts for Rippin ya Chest/
Cuz during ya funeral is the only time ya Pimpin a Vest/
Strippin the rest for their chedda like a Cheese Grader/
Lettin my heat melt over this beef with all These Haters/

little to short its kinda wack but man you got potentiol lol work on adding soounding liek more gangsta dont act wanksta but just add in like mean words like punches you kno what i mean 5/10 alright make it longer to

it was straight, i wasnt feelin it to much, it was kidna short, didnt think it flowed quite well, work on it man, keep doin your thing