ya one time for your mufuckin mind check it

bullets flyin/ innocent people diein/
children cryin/ still risin/ slicin n dicin/
knockout like tyson/ wit this rap liscence/
fightin/ eternally incense for the weed/
my heart bleeds as i overexceed
sucess in this rap industry
but still cant get signed cuz aint nobody/
knowin what i got and for hataz i got 2 shots/
and more/ leave u on the floor wit the 4 4/
u dont want drama and u dont want war/
and u dont want the killaz standin at ya door/
ready for u to come out to murder you whores/
put ya guns right back in ya drawers/
fight back and its over/ soulda known the boy was a soldier/
colder/ what ya body turnin fire when ya body burnin/
hide the evidence in yo residence shits tense/ suspense/
builds up like the stress/ i got the key and im lockin the game/
prospect mufucka neva knockin da name/ and if u mess round wit me im poppin ya brain,insane...


now what u want i got the glock in the back of my sock/
drawer/ u ready for more/ i got machedes n swords stashed
under the floor/ thats right step back u dont want it no more/
serve the feines get the green smoke the green
turn the party out do the damn thing/
i prove the damn thing/ im the next for sucess/
so put ya bullet proof vest/ back on/
shoulda heard this song give em the word hes gone/
spit wicked verbs in songs wit da synonoms/
rhythm get em when they sippin gin/
rappers way to feminine gettin em wit da sick flow
its official/ i stole the charts and stole ya hearts/
tore you apart/ lost ya life than i took ya wife
then i went n had ta hide the knife/ and grab the shovel
buried u in the mist of war intense hustle.

nice shit overall...bit the structure was hard to follow...thats really all that stood out except for dem flames u was spittin...keep it up homie and holla at me...1

i agree wit my boy black magik, tite shit overall

whats up lemme get some more replies lil drew black magic thanks for the replies
holla at me, peace