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08-24-04, 11:07 PM | #1 | |
Middle Weight
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Quick rap As Club Manager
IP:
Quick rap As Club Manager
Don’t play with fools must obey the rules or leave the club Can’t squeeze and hug a girl in here you better freeze your love Habits, thugs don’t grab it in here, you can flow reminiscing but No kissing, my job in despair while music revolve the air by cuts From DJ as a club manager I’m a scrub damager that kick butts Girls twisting and strut butt hey yall listen up, must buy drinks Try link to her soul use dye or ink write a love letter get winks Can deal with cutie but don’t feel the booty there’s kinks In your game ask her name don’t let the affair shatter your Air bladder, sip some rum and coke can’t be dumb folk pour Her cup, but your place at school in to embrace the rule and Taste the cruel fuel of love high octane in your tank and plan To win her love, begin to thug wear blings and share things |
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08-25-04, 03:08 AM | #2 | ||
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IP:
gd stuff props to ya dawg 7/10
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08-25-04, 05:17 AM | #3 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
i would have to rate this a 6 /10 good rap though
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08-25-04, 11:35 AM | #4 | |
Middle Weight
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IP:
thanks for the props for real on this one
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08-25-04, 11:41 AM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP:
I can tell you got a badddd flow.
Dig this though. Have you ever thought about typing your lines together, as to not make them seem like poetry but more like a flow, using slashes perhaps? Like this: Don’t play with fools must obey the rules/ or leave the club/ Can’t squeeze and hug a girl in here you better freeze your love/ Habits, thugs don’t grab it in here, you can flow reminiscing /but No kissing/ my job in despair while music revolve the air by cuts/ From DJ as a club manager I’m a scrub damager that kick butts
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08-25-04, 02:25 PM | #6 | |
Middle Weight
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IP:
Ms.Skillz4daze thanks for the props for real and I will try your advice
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