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Rapula has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 08:59 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-27-04 09:00 PM.

Rapula Son listen
You can only dream of beating me, now I'll make you quite scared
bitch! Freddy's dead! so now I'll just be Rapula's New Nightmare
I don't fight fair, so just use defense like the Baltimore Ravens
this is a deathmatch, well at least that's what we'll call it for Rapula mis behavin
before you're killed beware, you need to learn how to get in the game
You'll never be top on this board, you're not in the picture and can't even fit in the frame
you've had your fun, now don't post whatever you were about to write
I would say that your verse is going to be good, but I know your gonna bite
Everybodys knows I murder shit.. .no doubt that this place should
Even yo’ bitch knows I’m a leader...she said my dictate good

thunderous-ways, will be how i *kill this faggot* cuz i *plunder-gays*
my flows produce heat and im quick to *melt ice* like *summer-days*//
this chicken-confesses, its like *pirates sharin treasures* the way im *splittin-ya-chest-kid*
rap spittin-the-best-shit, plus ill *lose I.P* faster than *switchin-addresses*//
ima raw-fuck, i brawl-bucks, call you a *leprechaun* cuz you winnin is *all-luck*
leave ya balls-stuck, to the floor so ppl need to help *pick-up* like *small-trucks*//
slice-pricks, kill you, take you out ya grave, kill you again just to do it twice-bitch
ya lifes-shit, so its guaranteed ill leave ya *status frozen* witta name like *ice*-pick//
*roll* on you like *dice*-quick, bruise-till-you-seizure, do-it-for-leisure
as for ya grave ill have *ice-boxed* faster than the *cubes-in-my-freezer*//

thunderous-ways, will be how i *kill this faggot* cuz i *plunder-gays*
my flows produce heat and im quick to *melt ice* like *summer-days*//
this chicken-confesses, its like *pirates sharin treasures* the way im *splittin-ya-chest-kid*
rap spittin-the-best-shit, plus ill *lose I.P* faster than *switchin-addresses*//
ima raw-fuck, i brawl-bucks, call you a *leprechaun* cuz you winnin is *all-luck*
leave ya balls-stuck, to the floor so ppl need to help *pick-up* like *small-trucks*//
slice-pricks, kill you, take you out ya grave, kill you again just to do it twice-bitch
ya lifes-shit, so its guaranteed ill leave ya *status frozen* witta name like *ice*-pick//
*roll* on you like *dice*-quick, bruise-till-you-seizure, do-it-for-leisure
as for ya grave ill have *ice-boxed* faster than the *cubes-in-my-freezer*// !!!!

sorry about that....i dont know why it posted twice..

Voted For: Rapula

my vote goes to rapula his verse was very good had betta wordplay, multis, punchlines...... ice ya verse was nice too but i think u could have came harder.

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thanks for voting i really appreciate it....good battle ice...much respect

aight.......can we get some more votes please.....upp

Voted For: Ice Pick

haha nice battle.

rapula-real nice verse. structure was a lil iffy tho. punches connected, decent wordplay and personals. i think ur a "newb" but you sure dont rap like one. but yeah overall nice...8.25/10

Ice Pick- after i read rap's verse, i thought you had lost. but your verse was tight with the punches structure just eveything but personals was on point but since im pretty sure hes new, you couldnt really use them. but yea, overall, if you step up your personals, you will become recognized more widely.....9.5/10

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