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Nova in the sky
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three points a triangle, so sacred//
two triangles caress, the star of David// Nova agmounst the matrix, shine so brite// expressed in light, shines divine at nite// the holy type, still writes and fondles mics// stellar sight, untouchable, skyline heights// off in flight, but only land momentarily// cemetary, now i'm back in the air n breeze// spirit free wit verity, off in space again// briter and wiser where the atmosphere ends// fire within, to be me it takes patient// waitin, no stipulation fo constellations//
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nice poem, kind of short, but i guess its ok, i know this has meaning to you, which is nice, but i feel it was kind of vague, but still nice piece and keep it up, it had a nice flow to it as well
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Banned: Cheating
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need ot extend that shit cuz...but it was dope...nice dawg.
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short but pretty good
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