Battle Rules:

crew battle: E-dubz (class sic) vs DrasticMeasureZ (PSA)

10-14 Lines
no crew/hate or d/r Votes
no biting
no feeding
no recycling

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 08-31-04 at 07:17 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-30-04 08:49 PM.

e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-31-04 03:18 PM.

im the meanest emcee, my lyrics will make u say im a genius
you couldnt ‘beat’ me....... if my name was tattood on ur ‘penis’
you lost in space, your in a constant state called constipate
concentrate, you get fucked so much, your period's often late
so im destroyin this nigga wit a path of destruction thats so ruthless
you couldnt pick-it apart....... if you used a full box of tooth-picks

we changed it to 3 bars cuz he wanted too

Spit lyrcal bullets at max speed so you can't "D"uck my "S"ick-ness/
Verbal "magic" how I switch the "D" wit the "S" so you can "S"uck my "D"ick bitch!//
Take this, my flow "swallow~less" like a virgin's BJ, the "first~time"/
After my lines, you couldn't give ya "conscience enough weed" to get ya "hopes~high"//
My lyrical embrace concaves your spine till' it taps da back of ya rip-cage/
You'd have to rename my country "HURT", jus to say I'm "In~Pain"//
You'd probably have to put "C-C-C-C" jus so your rhymes could "blast-off"/(C4...)

ehhhhhh i hope its enough

uppin..

aight you murded this kid...wow i didnt no that he sucked that much....goood shit edubz......that is wat i expected form you

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Voted For: e-dubz

e-dubz u had better verse.......better structure..and it made more sense..i dunno wat the hell DM was talkin about with the switchin the d n s well i did but it was GAY..u had harder punches n beter vocab

dm: ur shit was ok..good multi's n flow but everything else was weak ur shit didnt make sense and the punches werent hittin hard..neither ussed personals

vote: e dubz

return te favour and drop an honest vote on this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137779

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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

DM...nice flow, hard punches...no DIRECT personals, but nice wordplay and structure, i like the C4 line, but you shouldve put another line after it it was ncomplete

edubz-nice flow also....some hard punches in there, but you fell off near the end of you flow, and i think that hurt you in this battle...again, no DIRECT personals that i saw in there...but u also had nice wordplay and ok structure...that 'beat' me line was aight, but it lacked something, idk wut...but something

overall a good flow...nice rhyming and all that other shit i said...i saw a lot of creativitie in hear...i like that...


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Voted For: e-dubz

Spit lyrcal bullets at max speed so you can't "D"uck my "S"ick-ness/
Verbal "magic" how I switch the "D" wit the "S" so you can "S"uck my "D"ick bitch!//
no...this wasnt tight....at all
Take this, my flow "swallow~less" like a virgin's BJ, the "first~time"/
After my lines, you couldn't give ya "conscience enough weed" to get ya "hopes~high"//
are you trying to diss dubs?
My lyrical embrace concaves your spine till' it taps da back of ya rip-cage/
You'd have to rename my country "HURT", jus to say I'm "In~Pain"//
You'd probably have to put "C-C-C-C" jus so your rhymes could "blast-off"/(C4...)
last line was funny but not personal

im the meanest emcee, my lyrics will make u say im a genius
you couldnt ‘beat’ me....... if my name was tattood on ur ‘penis’
LMAO this was a dope punch
you lost in space, your in a constant state called constipate
concentrate, you get fucked so much, your period's often late
ehhh decent nice multies
so im destroyin this nigga wit a path of destruction thats so ruthless
you couldnt pick-it apart....... if you used a full box of tooth-picks
not personal but so so

vote: dubz for a better verse

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Huh china.

i can't vote, so i'm jus checkin out the progress of this battle if ya'll don't mind..

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