King Of Punch lines #4

Your fake handshakes are sticky like a pancake, rhymes
Don’t chew well your crew smell use right guard time
And time again you blind like sin a slight retard in the mind
Lame jerk with no framework your game don’t perk like coffee
A corrupt cup of that I can’t sip even with sweet-n-low a softy
Even with a shed or barn head couldn’t farm the crops
They’ll rot in the ground your slop don’t sound hot or hit spots
Igniting trash and your lightning don’t flash like rain cloud
Can’t tame crowds weak verse the street worse shouldn’t be allowed
To rap, here at seven eleven my rhymes appear in heaven
Ready for a slurpee like Eddie Murphy try chill like Devin
On Nightrider bazaar shit like the car Kit spinning wheels
And ending deals, bending heels like Timberland boots cats squeals
My gun sprays like sunrays you wanna chase waterfalls
Disgrace to slaughter all your crew I’m chief I order all
Your activity, I have stink powers you soft like pink flowers
Your blooms not in tune with rap just some doomed crap never towers
You not a winner dropping rhymes I’m a king interlocking spines
Like spinal taps doing final raps before exploding to fame bell chimes
Got flavor like mayonnaise man you best raise your hand
And praise this plan while I blaze the land at your command

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how old are you? if you on the young side then it's good but if you older than you should spit wit less all around punches. u no you punches don't end up flowing togeter. but still a str8 verse holla at the like in my sig

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A.K.A. don't know what wrong but other sites tell me these lines right here alone could be one of the badest spit ever on the net but anyway thanks for responding this shit so ill some cats couldn't comprehend feel me?

You not a winner dropping rhymes I’m a king interlocking spines
Like spinal taps doing final raps before exploding to fame bell chimes
Got flavor like mayonnaise man you best raise your hand
And praise this plan while I blaze the land at your command

it was tite...nice drop...

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1.LIL'DREW thanks for the props for real dawg

2. we say silence gives consent feel me Abstrakt but anyway thanks fo rresponding for real

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pretty tight shit man

dope

wow! thanks for the props for real yall

yo...was aight...but wasnt nearly close to the best spits on the net....not even close...who ever told u that lieing...but ure pisce was str8...keep it up...

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iight drop man.. not the greatest punches but some nice one in it...the whole thing didnt really flow to well ...

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thanks for the props and critique must keep on dropping for real

Hmm this shit was iight didn't see no hard punches or anythng I really liked keep trying and think outsde the box the inside is to crowded anyway. 1's keep at it

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