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09-01-04, 11:42 PM
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tell me what you see
IP:
when you look into my eyes tell me what you see
you see pain an suffering of a lost soul lost so much, miss so many, only loved one all i can do is pitty,. she won't come back it hurts so much to know, i ruined it all, we had to grow. miss her so much i try not to allow it to show. but then you look in my eyes, and then it all comes out, all the pain and sorrow. ya another short one, drop some feed n i'll get back at you |
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09-03-04, 06:19 PM
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IP:
feed back plz leave a link n i'll get back at ya
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09-09-04, 12:01 AM
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IP:
damn quit sleepin uppin
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09-09-04, 12:17 AM
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IP:
i was feelin this poem short -n- sweet i like that.....i give this a 7/10
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09-09-04, 02:17 AM
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IP:
This was a keystyle, right? It was too choppy. Didn't flow too nice. I saw the though but I didn't feel the thought in this piece, you feel me? You wasn't articulate enough. Keep elevating though.
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09-11-04, 01:44 AM
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IP:
ay thanks fa da feed...still uppin
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