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Swigg 0 0%
ShackleS 5 100.00%
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Old 09-05-04, 12:27 PM   #1
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ShackleS vs Swigg

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Old 09-05-04, 12:28 PM   #2
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Swigg has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 12:28 PM.
 
Old 09-05-04, 12:30 PM   #3
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ShackleS has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 12:30 PM.
 
Old 09-05-04, 12:50 PM   #4
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checkin in with verse.........

hey u pussy, its about time I delt with you rookie,
you online all the time beggin for some milk with your cookies,
Shackles, no1 respects u on this site, go get some friends,
ur bout to be hit wit more CLIPS than Sportscenter on ESPN,
for real dawg u need 2 stop rappin man, it hurts,
i mean look! even Bob Marley is laughin at ya verse!
fuckin faggot thinks he took me but when truth hits the stores,
RV will see your on various nuts like the boards a mental ward,
look how weak ya team is, ima straight beat u squeemish,
in this battle, i got more 2nd looks at my lines than cleavage,
 
Old 09-05-04, 12:51 PM   #5
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ShackleS has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 12:51 PM.
 
Old 09-05-04, 12:59 PM   #6
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Your lines Are like A Joy Ridden Car Coz Man They Straight Wrecked ...
You in A Battle Is Like an E~mail Wit No Title U Missin Tha Subject ...
You Must Like to Lose Thats Why You Excepted Why Else You Accepet ...
Spittin Them Lines I Know They Aint Yours, That's Copyright Theft ....
Like Signin A Lullaby My Rhymes Will Put You To Sleep Don't Wake~Up ...
False Bruises, Man You Weak Thats Why ya Wear Ya Mums Make~Up ...
You Remind Me Of A Sample Dildo Coz ya Know Everyone Can Beat~You ...
Man i'm Suprised Ya Aint Got Seven Names Everyone Know U Weak~Dude(Week)
I'll Spit this With A Stutter Coz You Know It Could Beat More Than Once ...
Man You'll Always Be Behind My "Barz" Coz Im tha Warden An U Da Cons
 
Old 09-05-04, 01:01 PM   #7
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Nice Drop Man ..................... Aight Lets Get Sum Votes ...............
 
Old 09-05-04, 03:25 PM   #8
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Voted For: ShackleS

swigg ok flow and structure punches need work but were ok no real personals or disses vocab is ok a 3/10
shackles good opener good flow and structure good punches and wordplay here good ender also nice vocab as well a 6/10
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Old 09-05-04, 03:28 PM   #9
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Voted For: ShackleS

This was not a fair battle the way I look at it. Swigg had no good punches...no wordplay..nothin that could give him a chance to win. Don't get down though..keep tryin and you'll get it. Now your verse was aight shackles. You had wordplay..some punches...and multis. You won this battle fair and square. Nice like wit the e-mail thing.
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Old 09-05-04, 04:05 PM   #10
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Voted For: ShackleS

my vote is for shackles ........ da first line was crazy and the punches were good too ......... lol @ dildo line too that was crazy
 
Old 09-05-04, 07:04 PM   #11
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Voted For: ShackleS

ShackleS gets my vote for this one...(no d/r vote)..

He just had harder punches than Swigg..tha vocab was nice..structure was in place and not stretched out..and tha flow was nice...get rid of tha ( ~ )'s shitz..

Swigg yo verse was good too..tha punches could've been harder den ShackleS and you would've won this match..
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