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MaNiPuLaTiOn 5 55.56%
sHoTTaBoY 4 44.44%
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Old 09-05-04, 04:27 PM   #1
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sHoTTaBoY vs MaNiPuLaTiOn

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Old 09-05-04, 04:28 PM   #2
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Old 09-05-04, 04:52 PM   #3
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I Got This Lil Fuck Bendin Over Backwards 4 Me Cause Of 'MANIPULATION'..
He Came Too Me Askin To Help Him So He Can Get AFFILIATION..
Man If You Drop Ya Pants 4 Elton John You'd Still Get No APPRECIATION...
After I'm Done Lyrically Abusin You I';ma Ram The Mic Down Ya Throat In CONCILATION..
...If This Was Face To Face U'd Be A Choke Artist Caused By Asphyxiation...
..Ya Emotions Are Locked Up n My Lyrics Are The COMBINATION..

.....I'ma Open U Up n Put Ya Heart On Your Sleeve..
...Nigguh U Juss Got MURDERD n If Ya Dont Believe Me Juss 'AskJEEVES'
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Old 09-05-04, 05:32 PM   #4
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Old 09-05-04, 05:52 PM   #5
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ima straight murder this clown like his "name" suggests...
"finish you off quickly", you like an unwanted maths test...
you belong in kindergartten wit your weak "nursery rhymes"..
beggin on the street...only time you gona see tha "dimes"..
this guy spits his abc`s wit e`s...but only causes zzzzzz`s..
got us all sleepy...peeps prayin please,stop hittin them keys!..
you a "middle" weight...but ur spits turn me off like a "light"...
you a "dyke",coz the way u punchin,ud think it was a pillow-fight"
you a rap "baby"...so i freewheel ya outta here like a trike..
only chance u got of elevatin,is to b reincarnated as a kite..
 
Old 09-05-04, 07:01 PM   #6
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my vote goes to shotta..
his punches just came harder...tha flow was pretty decent *fell a littler tho*..tha structure lack'd and tha vocab was aight..
mani yo verse was good too...structure was good, flow was aight..and tha vocab wa ok...
But shotta took this one becuz his punches were harder..(to me they were tho)
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Old 09-05-04, 07:47 PM   #7
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shotta boy took this yo..
good flow..hard punches. nice sims just straight out firyah from the start against ur opponent but it still need improving
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Old 09-05-04, 08:59 PM   #8
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Aight, Much Appreciated Ya'll...

Proppz MANIPULATION, Hot Verse
Uppppin 4 More Votes Ya'll
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Old 09-05-04, 09:04 PM   #9
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Shot u won
*A Hint dats not a dude
but nice verse lil wordplay nice punches
good flow could work on structure but good

Mani
ur good seen better ur wordplay wasn't really workin
diss time so ur punches weren't all dat good u had
better structure n ur flow was tight but u coulda did
better

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Old 09-05-04, 09:10 PM   #10
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Yo, Hold Up? MANIPULATION Is female?

daaaaaaaaamn, i didnt know that.......

i'm sorry i did u like this then mani, dont be mad...juss appreciate n holla at ya boy hahaha!!
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Old 09-05-04, 09:13 PM   #11
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ok shotta you aganist a femcee do research your punches now mean nothing here disses were ok for a man but not here flow and structure was streched work on that vocab ok a 3/10
manipulation good opener ender was ok a weak verse for you also but good flow and structure and a decent vocab pulled you through a 5/10
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Old 09-05-04, 09:16 PM   #12
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hahah, i had no idea it was a femcee, she set it up n i accepted, i juss flowed but daaaamn

she got rhymes 4 weeks dont she?

propps to that chick
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Old 09-05-04, 10:13 PM   #13
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i'll give it to manipulation, you had better punches, better personals, only the opener was a lil weak , both had good word choice but manip kept it simple and easy to get ha'i'm a lil under the wind so i need that now peace asap

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Old 09-06-04, 05:02 AM   #14
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U got this both came aight in this i admit ShoTTa i thought u had sum nice rhyming there kept the flow nice but the stuc lacked a lil and ya also went a bit self glory which isn't good...steer away from that...

Manip another nice verse u had sum nice punches, ur personals were on point, the wordplay was good rhyming was also decent, sum multies too u had the whole package in this keep em comin...

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Old 09-06-04, 05:53 AM   #15
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Vote: manipulation

Lyrics: Shottaboy
Wordplay: Manipulation
Multies: Manipulation
sturcture: Neither
Punches:Manipulation
Opening:Shottaboy
Ending: tied

Overall: Manipulation
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