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Old 09-10-04, 09:38 AM   #1
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help (sorry for those who have misunderstood me)

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I need help with rhyming like these kind of sound alike rhymes (ends sense) (wish kiss) (friend again) I need a lesson in these rhymes to become a good mc that's all I men't by assonance.
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Old 09-10-04, 09:39 AM   #2
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he don't know what assonance is lol
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Old 09-10-04, 09:49 AM   #3
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--__--.... man YOU DONT NEED TO BE AN ENGLISH EXPERT TO RAP... Look at canibus.. you think when he raps he thinks "oh, this rhyme may be assonance, i might use simile in my next line... Alliteration is a good asset, perhaps i should use that somewhere?"

.... NO HE FUCKIN DOESNT.... he just RAPS!! GET OVER ASSONANCE RHYMING, NOBODY ELSE BUT YOU KNOWS WHAT YOU MEAN... FUCKIN PRACTICE, YOULL GET BETTER... I AINT EVER SEEN YOU IN A BATTLE... dont come back at me like "but i did battle" I DONT CARE, I DIDNT SEE IT. You get better at rapping by practice... You cant just learn one thing and expect to be dope.. You know how much work it takes to be as good as the pro-rappers out there? A SHITLOAD, so stop asking and start learning..

by the way, this thread isnt meant to be hating on you or anything, just to open your eyes. I got no beef with you anymore.... Just go learn to rap and stop hawkin cats.

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Old 09-10-04, 09:44 AM   #4
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if you know why don't you tell me huh?
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Old 09-10-04, 09:47 AM   #5
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Because i don't want to...you do realise that these threads are a nuicense to this site now as you flood boards wit these constant questions...stop it oh and you got murdered...again
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Old 09-10-04, 09:48 AM   #6
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Why ain't you PM'd me every1 else seems to be hearing from you...why not me? *feels left out...NOT*
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Old 09-10-04, 09:52 AM   #7
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^^ Truth..

Why do you bother coming back here.. we obviously DONT want you here..
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Old 09-10-04, 09:52 AM   #8
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very much word
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Old 09-10-04, 09:57 AM   #9
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gangsta bitch fuck off get off my dick.
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Old 09-10-04, 09:59 AM   #10
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^thats the reason why your hated on. "get off my dick" ? Man by the looks of things he as far away from your dick as anybody can get...
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Old 09-10-04, 10:01 AM   #11
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I an't got time for your imature shit. Your very sad to think I actually care to be hated in your little rap form world I have a real life unlike you.
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Old 09-10-04, 10:06 AM   #12
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fuck you Sinner sup O-M-B
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Old 09-10-04, 10:06 AM   #13
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what life? dreamin about little rapping videogames? Finding pictures of eminem? Being on ems dick? Tellin us youve got a record deal then sayin "i was only jokin haha fooled you" when cats didnt belive ya? I find it hard to belive that you actually think youve got more of a life than me... I drop by here ta chill... But you aint respected at all on here, so if you gonna start dissin cats again, dont.
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Old 09-10-04, 10:07 AM   #14
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gangsta shit fuck you your an imature bitch. You don't have a life it's funny really.
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Old 09-10-04, 10:07 AM   #15
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just ignored me cos its true...
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