u think you know me, but you have no clue
u wont take the time to hear me, i'm just a wigger to you
ya, i know most people judge me, and this is a fact
no matter what i ever do, they say i'm tryin to act black
alot of whites dont like me, cuz i dont follow their trend
they ask why i hang with blacks, but wont except me as a friend
they think cuz i hang w/ blacks, that sumthins just been missin
they ask why i rap, cuz just MAYBE yall will listen
i know some of y'all like me, and understand who i am
but the rest need to mature, and just respect me as a man
yea i'm a man with pride, and a very strong spirit
i was blessed with the talent to put together these lyrics
(acapella)
you swear you dont say it, but continue to tread
maybe you'll understand me, after i'm dead..............


so while you tryin to bring me down, YOU WONT EVER BUDGE ME
so stop fuckin hatin ONLY GOD CAN JUDGE ME



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this has a bit of heart to it man ... but as far as lyrics go it no tthe greatest .. as far as im awear its your first open mic..so you got time to elevate man..you got potential thats for sure...my advice .get your own original idea ..and get tech as fuck with it..throw visionarys ,multis ,metas, and all that shit into it..

keep dropping ..pz

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word man....thanx

yer man.....im just starting out here too n shit but word......to me that was crossed between eminem (not because of the wigger shit just ur style) and there is definately some Tupac influence there(only God can judge me). but fuck it no beef maybe we can battle or sumthin soon.

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word, i appreciate it

Yo I enjoyed that shit, so fuk all the prior criticism. I also understand your plight, mufukaz on both sides dissin you. Oh and fuk all that shit about multis! Mufukin birds on this site worship multis and light feathery language in rhymes, while they fail to actually say anything at all. They got no content, no message, no theme whatsoever. But, they got Multis!...Bullshit I tell u!..Bullshit! Or if they do have a point of some sort, they end up drownin it in all that feathery shit and over cerebral psuedo intellectual guano. So keep doin your thing, cuz you got the hard part down, CONTENT(youre actually sayin sumpthin that can be understood and doesnt require a billion notes at the end to be understood.) Besides in time that other shit will come. Aight 1

yo i was feelin this shit... good content.. stay up



^^uhh... you crazy? battle me.........
content + multis = cats ripped
forced multis = cats wack

WELL!!

you know nothing of multis?!!!

battle me!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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lol.....do whatever u have to and win battles.

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Retracted

yo man. i know exactly what youre thinking and how you feel. being white myself with a passion for hip hop, i am often critisized for not "acting white." but fuck it man. if i had to choose between talking to people...and music...im flowin solo 100% and thats the only way it can be done. you hit me with that one kid...i liked the shit. keep it flowin man...dont let anyone bring you down or discourage you because of your color or racial background. "criticism is easy; art is difficult."

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thank yall, and i lik that qoute cordless....

i feel ya dawg i think all white rappers have these wors going through there head. hot drop

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=150419

hey can you post your thought's on this drop man .pz

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^^ lol One man Bnad is nasty at multies...

anways decent drop..you...had mad feelin going into this piece....emotions...were decent ... structure was alittle off at times but it was goood...other than that nice drop keep it up and elevate alittle and u'll be fine

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