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09-12-04, 04:24 PM
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#1
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..::shut the fuck up::..
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Rhyming Help
IP:
Hey people from now on im gonna focus getting better at my rhymes. I feel like I can start a fresh now and make somethig happen, all I needed was you to guide me. i'm only 16 aswell so i've got lots of time to improve being a rapper is like a dream to me. I'm also gettin my corny name changed to Imagine. Will you help me out with a couple of things here they are in bold.
Need to understand assonance rhyming and how often to use em... up to 2 sylables long How often to use perfect rhyming How to rhyme up your bars and make the sound of the flow great. Once I know all dat when it's explained I will be dope and I will go into your crew after dat.  |
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09-12-04, 05:07 PM
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#2
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Banned
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IP:
u'll never learn give up.........
it comes with pratices someone just cant tell u when to use it then it wouldnt be u'r work..... elevate n u'r own or leave the site.... |
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09-12-04, 05:53 PM
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#3
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Banned: Spamming
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IP:
plz dont use this wack faggot as a template for young british hip hop.
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09-12-04, 10:21 PM
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#4
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hullabaloser
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IP:
Damn straight^^^
It's people like you that give UK Hip Hop a bad name, spreadin ur wackness about the internet like that. Someone clean that shit up 
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09-13-04, 12:28 AM
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#5
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Better than you..
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IP:
i thought this wanker already bowed out.......lol he dreams about being a rapper.......how touching..lmao
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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09-13-04, 12:34 AM
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IP:
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i do too lol yo mayn you can't learn to be tight jus by tips you need to feel rap, but i'll help you out with voacb and shit jus AIM me ProVerse ~1~
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09-13-04, 04:34 AM
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#7
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP:
sinner go hang yourself
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R.I.P RAPVERSE
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09-13-04, 04:36 AM
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#8
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
I really think rap just isnt his thing..
Maybe he should try and write rock music or something.. |
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09-13-04, 04:37 AM
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#9
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP:
die sinner die die
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09-13-04, 04:40 AM
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#10
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP:
he should be a reporter cause he asks so many damn questions.
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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09-13-04, 04:43 AM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP:
or a cop lmao
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09-13-04, 04:44 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP:
ya wed all get away with crime if he was the law...damn ya changed your name again..lost soul....ohhh shit there jus gettin worse
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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09-13-04, 04:45 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
lol...
Word hed make a good cop... He bitches and winges enough.. And if any1 goes against him.. he reports them to authorities.. (for harrasment) |
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09-13-04, 04:45 AM
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STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP:
he has 90 crews and 28 alaiases
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09-13-04, 07:56 AM
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#15
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illy fo' really
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IP:
Can Sum1 Please Jus Ban Him ...
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