topic:life in jail(kinda like that song "Locked up")


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str8_hood has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 08:12 PM.

SUCC MACOKK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 08:15 PM.

A life of sin exchanged with a sentence longer then the 100 years war...
All for having commited crimes that involved rape,drugs,and whores...
Locked behind bars until the end of my time,and even more years to come...
Making sure not to drop the soap,for risks of getting raped in the bum...
Insane people,with madness in the looks on their faces...
Some who like it here,for having been in other places...
Uniform clothing,being handed out to all those convicted...
Guards with weapons,waiting for pain to be handed out and inflicted...
Some young kids of 18,who have not seen their best years...
Locked up in this horrible place,with nothing left but their tears...
Mostly black males, some skid whites but no other races...
All I can do is pray,as I look upon their gazes...
So here we stay to rot,until our bodies are no more...
Some say it's better here,than being in the streets and being poor...
I tell those people,to live life without crime...
Cause before you know it,your life will end up like mine...


Aight quick drop.Nice topic. goodluck.

i been busy mayn hope u understand that i aint jus backin out of the battle but stuff came up with my family so it would be cool if we could set upanother battle and set the due date for like 2 days