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Old 09-14-04, 07:35 PM   #1
huggy_bear
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sworn to secrecy.......

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best friend, commits a crime and i get questioned
what should i do? hes the one that did the molestin
not me, i wasnt even there, and i already got a girl
but he doesnt, so he decided to give rape a whirl
defiently turned out for the worse, that isnt worth contemplatin
if the cops find out, hes at least got 10 years, no probation
But waht the hell am I supposed to do
Im sittin here in the interrogation room
One bright like and its shyin in my eyes
Im getting sweaty and nervous cause im feedin em’ lies
Cause my best friend told me never to squeal
Or else hell give me emotional cuts and those bitches never heal
So I got two choices now and im not sure what to do
if I choose one its risk arrest, but the other, I risk my crew
God dammit! Im so confused, and I cant makeup my mind
But I gotta hurry up because im wasting precious time
Cuase if I lie,theres a possibility I might get sent away
Their awaiting an answer and hes waitin to see what I say
And theres no doubt that he touched when she didn’t wanna
He only knew her for 10 minutes when they met in the hotel sauna
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Last chance I gotta go now, and make it real quick
Should I go with my friend, or stand up for the rights of the chick?
I cant stand to lose my dog so im gonna lie
Tell em’ straight out, straight face, or at least im gonna try…

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Court day and here it goes heres the judges decision
*HES INNOCENT*, for the witnesses precision
Of getting his facts straight and telling the “truth”
He even made an example on me and said I was good for the youth
Im ont sure if I did right, the answer I still seek it
I kept it real quiet and didn’t leak it
I feel bad, yeah, but swore not to tell the secret
Cuase im not losin my friend I intend to keep it
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Old 09-14-04, 08:51 PM   #2
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streched lines and no stucture and needs some wordplay the rest was good tho like vocab and that
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Old 09-14-04, 08:52 PM   #3
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no hate buts its honest feedback man and im no newb to fuck with eather
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Old 09-14-04, 10:09 PM   #4
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uppin on this..................................

this was quick shit...........................
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Old 09-14-04, 11:24 PM   #5
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this was a nice drop....you need to work on the structure alittle and make the font maybe alittle smaller ...your vocab was str8..and your punchlines were also good overall keep it up....
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Old 09-15-04, 12:24 AM   #6
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yea yo that shit was strait, if that realy happend, then u made the right choice NEVA RAT OUT YO BOYS EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR..and dont pay attenchun to that lil freepostin hoe sha money or what ever his fuckin name is, kids a lil homo....1
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Old 09-15-04, 01:51 AM   #7
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this was pretty good for a quick drop, it seemed rushed, but otherwise had decent vocab and imagery, nice short piece.....good job fam...........1
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Old 09-15-04, 06:25 PM   #8
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uppin on this............................ give me some feedback
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Old 09-15-04, 06:34 PM   #9
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yo that shit was pretty good compared to most of tha shit i see in here.
it makes u think n listen thats why we all do dis
nicely done.
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