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sworn to secrecy.......
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best friend, commits a crime and i get questioned what should i do? hes the one that did the molestin not me, i wasnt even there, and i already got a girl but he doesnt, so he decided to give rape a whirl defiently turned out for the worse, that isnt worth contemplatin if the cops find out, hes at least got 10 years, no probation But waht the hell am I supposed to do Im sittin here in the interrogation room One bright like and its shyin in my eyes Im getting sweaty and nervous cause im feedin em’ lies Cause my best friend told me never to squeal Or else hell give me emotional cuts and those bitches never heal So I got two choices now and im not sure what to do if I choose one its risk arrest, but the other, I risk my crew God dammit! Im so confused, and I cant makeup my mind But I gotta hurry up because im wasting precious time Cuase if I lie,theres a possibility I might get sent away Their awaiting an answer and hes waitin to see what I say And theres no doubt that he touched when she didn’t wanna He only knew her for 10 minutes when they met in the hotel sauna -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Last chance I gotta go now, and make it real quick Should I go with my friend, or stand up for the rights of the chick? I cant stand to lose my dog so im gonna lie Tell em’ straight out, straight face, or at least im gonna try… -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Court day and here it goes heres the judges decision *HES INNOCENT*, for the witnesses precision Of getting his facts straight and telling the “truth” He even made an example on me and said I was good for the youth Im ont sure if I did right, the answer I still seek it I kept it real quiet and didn’t leak it I feel bad, yeah, but swore not to tell the secret Cuase im not losin my friend I intend to keep it |
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Banned: Cheating
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streched lines and no stucture and needs some wordplay the rest was good tho like vocab and that
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Banned: Cheating
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no hate buts its honest feedback man
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who wants a hug????
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uppin on this..................................
this was quick shit........................... |
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Jumpin' Along
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this was a nice drop....you need to work on the structure alittle and make the font maybe alittle smaller ...your vocab was str8..and your punchlines were also good overall keep it up....
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Light Weight
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yea yo that shit was strait, if that realy happend, then u made the right choice NEVA RAT OUT YO BOYS EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR..and dont pay attenchun to that lil freepostin hoe sha money or what ever his fuckin name is, kids a lil homo....1
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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this was pretty good for a quick drop, it seemed rushed, but otherwise had decent vocab and imagery, nice short piece.....good job fam...........1
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who wants a hug????
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uppin on this............................ give me some feedback
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New to RB
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yo that shit was pretty good compared to most of tha shit i see in here.
it makes u think n listen thats why we all do dis nicely done. |
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