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Old 09-15-04, 07:51 PM   #1
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.:World Premiere Freestyle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:.

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What ya'll all been waiting for. The Grim Reaper is here muthafuckas..........

Feed back please

(Yes it is a freestyle)
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Old 09-15-04, 07:59 PM   #2
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Deuce............................the flow is good at times it clips....but overall nice drop........nice story...lol now finally hoe we can collab
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Old 09-15-04, 08:03 PM   #3
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ight, uppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn dis shitttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
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Old 09-15-04, 08:05 PM   #4
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nice drop for a freestyle...i think you couldnt gone without the long pauses
in your verse....just flow right through but nice shit
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Old 09-15-04, 08:12 PM   #5
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coo, uppin for more feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed back...........
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Old 09-15-04, 08:17 PM   #6
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Hoe show some love back on couple tracks..lol dont be greedy nitty now..

Choose from

World Drama

or

The Way Of Life.
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Old 09-15-04, 08:20 PM   #7
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Already listened the way of life fam, why you trippin, and you know it was tight as well as I know it was tight. I haven't listened to the other one, but there you go pussy, lol, j/k.....
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Old 09-15-04, 08:22 PM   #8
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SICK..... too bad ur in psa..
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Old 09-15-04, 08:28 PM   #9
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Ill shit, gotta love that classic Luniz beat, I'm excited to hear you spit some written shit man...
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Old 09-15-04, 08:36 PM   #10
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Yo people feelin it, uppppppppppppppppppppppin for more feedback...................
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Old 09-15-04, 08:39 PM   #11
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You need some practice with Cool Edit.....or whatever program you're using. Vocals were a little loud and clipped a bit at points. You can cut the instrumental a little shorter too and fade your shit out so people don't sit there and expect some more rapping......lol. Nice track though
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Old 09-15-04, 08:43 PM   #12
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Yeah, first time using coo edit, but I'm only concerned with what they think about the drop than the make up of it. I'll fix that on some later tracks.
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Old 09-15-04, 08:50 PM   #13
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now by freestyle are you saying like a free write.. liek you wrote for the beat.. or are u saying u just found a beat listened for a minute.. then recorded w/e came out.. it sounded liek you wrote it.... just wondering which it is.. cause it definatly sound written..

but any formy thoughts..


it was strait.. i'd liek to hear more emotion tho... and those pauses need to be stopped lol... it was coo tho.. keep doin it
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Old 09-16-04, 10:31 AM   #14
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Yeah it was a freestyle. My real spit is more complex and when i drop some of my tracks off my demo, ya'll can see what i mean.
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Old 09-16-04, 11:54 AM   #15
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Hella nice drop deuce .... nice freestyle ... You record that on your computer or sum1 else's ...
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