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Check in by: 09-19-04 at 10:48 PM

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cordless has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 10:48 PM.

streetryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-16-04 10:48 PM.

streetryda sounds like a meat-bita(er)
it seems kinda youre as dirty as feet dinas(ers)
a deep mina(er) in the canals of his mothers vagina
but others will find ya - not able to perform
ive been doin some simple shit since before you were born
advanced placement to where kings rise atop
the bountyless peasants who fuck up all the crops
im above you son - not your ordinary blazer
clean cut - and i am sharper than a razor
woah - im admitting that last line was a little too lame
but for you dawg - still to much to explain
are you there? can you hear me? ya slow street weasle
my flows is so ill that im sicker than the measles BITCH

aight man u aksed for this battle
lil baby you want some to entertain you go play wif your rattle/
ill rattle this cow tip him over and he wont be able to get back up/
you mayb think you hot but you not my votes gona stack up/
so pack up and wrap up some food cuz your going on a long vacation/
its gone be eternal cuz tear you up always eternal/
my cake stays while you cakes fades like in a urinal/
you cannot beat anything mor than your dick/
thats right bitch you cut off thats why u mothat fucking cord-less/
you say you hard but you looking like a limp noodle/
ill heat you up like a toaster strudel/
but i left you burnt in the toaster/
you smell that? my punch lines wake you up like a coffee roasta/
i whip you around give you one hell of a ride like u one a rolla coasta/
so dawg you a young g still tryna hit that pussy/
you cant hit shit cant rap you a shit talking rookie/
thinkin you kewl cuz you play hookie/
lookie thats why u run when u see me pull up/
i smoke u like a blunt as soon as i roll up/

uppin man nice verse not bad for your first battle keep it up man

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uppin

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Now - exhibit, styles I kick with it
Pardon me, but I'm fuckin sickwiddit
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uppin again

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Now - exhibit, styles I kick with it
Pardon me, but I'm fuckin sickwiddit
--Big Daddy Kane

yo uppin man where these votes at damn stop sleepin

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read this bitch

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Now - exhibit, styles I kick with it
Pardon me, but I'm fuckin sickwiddit
--Big Daddy Kane

Voted For: streetryda

streetryda sounds like a meat-bita(er)
it seems kinda youre as dirty as feet dinas(ers)
^^^^^^^^^^ weak ass opener elevate on dem punches

a deep mina(er) in the canals of his mothers vagina
but others will find ya - not able to perform
ive been doin some simple shit since before you were born
advanced placement to where kings rise atop
the bountyless peasants who fuck up all the crops
^^^^^^^^^ aight nice flow where da punches mayne

im above you son - not your ordinary blazer
clean cut - and i am sharper than a razor
woah - im admitting that last line was a little too lame
but for you dawg - still to much to explain
are you there? can you hear me? ya slow street weasle
my flows is so ill that im sicker than the measles BITCH
^^^^^^^^^^ weak homie no punches were throwin u had flow but da punches wasnt in der keep tryin elevate on dem punches homie,,,,,,, start throwin some


aight man u aksed for this battle
lil baby you want some to entertain you go play wif your rattle/
ill rattle this cow tip him over and he wont be able to get back up/
you mayb think you hot but you not my votes gona stack up/
so pack up and wrap up some food cuz your going on a long vacation/
its gone be eternal cuz tear you up always eternal/
my cake stays while you cakes fades like in a urinal/
^^^^^^^ aight on dis part he threw punches harder dan urs cordless and da flow was much harder

you cannot beat anything mor than your dick/
thats right bitch you cut off thats why u mothat fucking cord-less/
you say you hard but you looking like a limp noodle/
ill heat you up like a toaster strudel/
but i left you burnt in the toaster/
you smell that? my punch lines wake you up like a coffee roasta/
i whip you around give you one hell of a ride like u one a rolla coasta/
^^^^^^^^^ ha nice mayne harder flowz and harder punches

AIGHT i stopped readin

my vote goes to streetryda becuz of harder punches and flowz

cordless work on dem punches mayne start throwin some punches u had flow but u didnt had no punches

v-street becuz of harder flowz and harder punches

uppin for real man thanks

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Voted For: streetryda

streetryda
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was kinda stretchy...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

cordless
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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uppin

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Now - exhibit, styles I kick with it
Pardon me, but I'm fuckin sickwiddit
--Big Daddy Kane

yo man VOTE OR DIE in this muthaa!!
come on man for real where these votes at??

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