Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-17-04 at 12:23 AM

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oreo has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 12:04 AM.

my verses is like matrix 2, hey come fully loaded,
some say im like dale earnheart cuz on my last trak i exploded,
you in a dream world, think im add to a casualty,
but your loss is real fam, so come back to reality
you wanted some, so come on lets rumble,
cuz oreo is one cookie you can not crumbe,
my flow is to hot to speak, havok is bout to reak,
i aint loss yet who bout to stop my streak,
my future in this game depends on who i butcher,
cuz most cats like you get punked like ashton kuthcher
(ashton got the tv show puked, i dunno if that show that in cannada)

Red Bull has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-17-04 12:21 AM.

kids a mixture of black and white, it just aint right*
be surprised if he can even write enough rhymes to put up a fight

just joined rv, now your battlin me, fuck it pull the chord
cause id win this fuckin battle if i didn't own a keyboard

says hes from murk town...whats that, population one?**
living there solo thinking about all the battles you never won

kid thinks hes gangsta, but only went to jail for the shower
screamed out white power, bent over and took it for an hour

cause oreo just don't know, but hes gotta realize hes wacker
names himself after an cookie but calls himself a cracker***


*oreos are black and white
**thing says hes from murk town
***in his sig it says "how you gonna make it as a rapper if yo scared of this cracker?"

damn fam you got racist on me?
murk town is the nasti nati,(cincinnati, ohio poulation more then cana(duh))
oreo is a nick name cuz hoes say im double stuffed and
that cracker thing is a joke,

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haha im white too man, its all personals...good luck

Voted For: Red Bull

red bull took this battle he didnt have good vocab tho but he had worplay and metas i see them and he had some dope flow:
punches: red
vocab: oreo
wordplay: redbull
metas: redbull
multi's: redbull
stucture: no one
flow: no need for this in text
vote/ Redbull

Voted For: Red Bull

kid thinks hes gangsta, but only went to jail for the shower
screamed out white power, bent over and took it for an hour

^^ funny shit

you wanted some, so come on lets rumble,
cuz oreo is one cookie you can not crumbe,

^^ lol


ok, kewl spits both.... i liked this battle

lemme break it down

punches: tie
personals: red
flow: red
mettas: tie
multies: none
vocab: none
funny: red (i kno it doesnt count)

^^ voting not really a fair reflection of the battle, cos red kinda just just beat oreo in all the categories he won (in my eyes).... should be a close battle..... anyway... thats my honest vote!! peace

ya im white to but im only 12 but you should see my rhymes im explosuf

Voted For: Red Bull

no contest red bull got this hands down better structured punches n flow was there n on point in most areas ,oreo,you gotta work on your punches n don't use self glorification in your battle verses,its a bad idea...red bull gets this .not much more i can say it was a 1 sided battle...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!

Voted For: Red Bull

Red Bull won this on structure...flow...the rhyme scheme the punches were also a winning factor also i felt ya came quite personal in this too...

Oreo not a bad verse but ya could still do wit some work on the punches but i think u need to work on it a lil bit more before ya step into this again

V/Red Bull

RTF on this link wit an honest vote because i voted...and it wouldn't be fair now would it

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Bizzy

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Voted For: Red Bull

oreo- too much self glorification playa. try to get more complex with ya shit. read all the tutorials and all that, just seemed like a rhyming verse, not a dissing one. keep doin ya thang and elevate.....4/10

red bull- ehh the punches were funny and all but i dunno bout how GOOD they were. try to get more complex also, cuz when u start movin in to EFL thats what youre gunna need. and somethings u reallly dont gotta explain about, just pisses people like me off. elevate.....6/10

v//red bull

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