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09-18-04, 07:40 PM | #1 | |
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Stick to your own skin(rough draft)
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He hated his skin like a resentful child hates an abusive parent
He often walked the villages envying the skins of others He was jealous He was bitter He was trapped in this skin that abused his soul Then one morning he awoke to a skinless body He had shed He felt so free He walked onto the front steps of his cottage and shouted for joy When he did so the skin of all human existence shed Skin, flesh and confusion laced with distraught fear gripped the globe, affecting all but him. He was ecstatic as he raced to try on skins He picked the first he saw off the dirt ground and stepped inside It didn’t fit He spotted a second and did the same It didn’t fit He tried on many other skins None fit As many as he had tried on none would fit his frame Face skin too long and narrow A simple smile and it would break down the middle Shoulder and arm skin too broad It fit him like a coat. Stomach skin so vast from obesity it touched the ground as he stood Leg skin so potentially constraining the skin burst before he could put his whole limb of flesh in Years and years he would spend trying on skins He found several generic matches but there were still too many subtle difficulties Toes, fingers, crotch, facial features, running He could never find one that fit Until he had circled the whole globe and was now looking at the back door of his cottage He walked upon it and didn’t even recognize it The door was open and welcoming, so he went in to see what he could find. He took two steps in and noticed a door on the right There was a bedroom In the bed he saw skin, and he had a special feeling about it as he stared upon it He put it on. It was a perfect fit! He had finally found that skin that fit like his very own did |
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09-18-04, 11:40 PM | #2 | ||
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Damn homey, this was incredible, and such a great piece, it made me smile, wow, you're so creative and original, this topic was dope, so he finally was comfortable in his own skin,,,,,,,,,thats so cool!! nice job
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09-18-04, 11:43 PM | #3 | |
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Thanks man I appreciate the feed.
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