Battle Rules:

6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
yall kno tha rest

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-19-04 at 06:09 AM

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Logikal"Lyrickz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 05:40 AM.

Mc_BaD_bOy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-19-04 05:44 AM.

yo yo u cant rap ur just so gay n crap//
ur face is wack ur mum n dad h8 u u cant rap//
ill give u some nappies ull need um after this verse//
u dumb fuck if i gave u a car u wudnt no how to re-verse//
ur rhymes n rhifum r shit ill hit u in nda face now tha is a hit//
u piece of shit ul nv learn not to mess with the guy u r so shit//

Dis cat thinks hes "Phat" k Nigga let me see bout dat/
Ill eat u up and shit you OUT theres no way u gonna win dis BOUT/My rhymes will leave ya wid a speech and typin' impedement/U be livin in a shithole and u aint even a resident/
My rhymes be like stone COLD/Coz onli time u get noticed is when u write in BOLD/

uppin 4 votes ok verse logikal good luck

VOTES PLZ uppin

Voted For: Mc_BaD_bOy

yo mc_bad boy wins dis he had harder punches hes stture was better i liked his verse better alright battle both need to eleavate mc bad boy wins dis 1 peace out

Voted For: Logikal"Lyrickz

Logikal"Lyrickz i Was feelin ya, better
then Mc bad boy Nice Structure, Punchlinez good but not hard enough... Everything was good though

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uppin^^^^com on ppl dont sleep on tha better mc

yo coem on uppin dis shit uppin 4 votes......

Voted For: Logikal"Lyrickz

punches/personals-logikal, badboys really weak and didnt hit, most if not all aspects of the punches were played and they werent creative, logikals was ok but way better then logikal in this case -best line would be the last one with stone cold and bold-

vocab and creativity-logikal, badboy didnt have good vocab gotta work on that a lot and wasnt creative with his punches at all
yo yo u cant rap ur just so gay n crap//
ur face is wack ur mum n dad h8 u u cant rap//
^wtf was that lol, no creativity,vocab or anythin good for a good opener (no hate jus sayin gotta work on that stuff)

overall picked logikal, was more creative,had better vocab and harder hitting punches

no hate both tried good luck peace

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thnx uppin needin dis closed^^^^^

Voted For: Mc_BaD_bOy

AAight here we go...
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Opener-MC
Closer-Dip
Personals-MC
Punches-Dip
Metas-None
Multies-Dip
Structure-MC
Overall Best Verse-MC
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Yo this was a weak battle Dip-work on you structure ALOT and go to the tutorials we all can learn alot there......MC-never ever use the same rhymin word 3 times and a row again "ur rhymes n rhifum r SHIT ill hit u in nda face now tha is a hit//
u piece of SHIT ul nv learn not to mess with the guy u r so SHIT//.....damn thats wack dont do it again PLEASE...not bad structure....you should use some multies and work on your word play alot.....please return the favor wit an unbias vote on my sig.......V/Mc

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