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09-23-04, 03:22 PM
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Locked Up(remix by Xdecent)
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I've been goin crazy up til this ~point~//
400 days 22 hours ive been locked up in this ~joint~// and u wuldnt beleve how much family ive ~disappoint~// jus sittin in ur cell feel like little time has ~passed~// drop ur soap and brothaz wanna fuck you in the ~ass~// so im on my own, i remain an ~outkast~// waitin in line....gotta eat this crummy ~food~// wanna watch tv but the warden catches an ~attitude~// cant play ball without gettin in a ~feud~// gotta take a bath with otha brothas in the ~nude~// after that, i cant even look at a ~dude~// aint recieved any mail for ~days~// ever since that drug raid by the ~f.d.a.~// sittin all day in a cell can put u in a ~craze~// reach to tie your shoe and niggaz gotta ~gaze~// play your part you gotta watch what you ~shout~// or get knocked by big dudes right dead in your ~mouth~// this whole jail thing dont know wut its ~bout~// but its only 3 months 4 days till they let me ~out~// (regular locked up verse x2)
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09-23-04, 03:23 PM
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#2
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IP:
feedback please......
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09-23-04, 03:25 PM
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP:
i did this to......its a hott song ill get chu the link
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09-23-04, 03:27 PM
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP:
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09-23-04, 03:32 PM
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IP:
urs is hot....thanks for da feedback
more feedback pleaze
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09-23-04, 03:37 PM
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP:
thanks urs is hott
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09-23-04, 03:45 PM
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GoD LiKe
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Yuck
I Hate That Fuckin Song Wackest Fuckin Song On The Radio
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09-23-04, 03:47 PM
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I'm BAAAAAAAAKK
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IP:
no that wuld def b lil flip an sunshine or ja rule an r kelly an fiesta pt. 3345
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09-23-04, 03:50 PM
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L.E
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IP:
Pretty good...just need to work on structure and flow. Other than that, you got potential. Keep it up, and peep mine. "Street Poet aka Wreckage Diss".
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09-24-04, 06:50 PM
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#10
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IP:
feedback peeplez
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09-24-04, 06:57 PM
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IP:
that was tight yo, all the muhfuckas that kno bout jail, or has done shit that would put they ass in there, feels that song, and most likely will feel yo verse, peace
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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB -crunchy blac(three 6 mafia) i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged -styles p(the lox) u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice -I 20 Quote:
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09-25-04, 06:35 PM
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IP:
thanx sinn.......more feedback pleez
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