where tha real soulja's at, lemme see ya raise yo gats
cock em back, bus’ a cap and watch MC’s brains go splat
bust sum for dem fallen soulja's of the projects
release yo anger at those that won't show respect
most of our brotha'z got shot down by the cops
we should fuckin shoot y'all , we are the special hood ops
instead of spittin tight rhymes , we be spittin our rights
in tha name of the fallen soulja's let us all fight
keep doin yo shit till dem fuckers starts to bleed
show dem who we are , soulja's of the lost streetz
poppin dem police fuckers down with yo nine
this means war muthafuckers , u have just crossed tha line
we aint goin , we bout to flow our way into tha fight
y'all don't mean shit to us , our ppl bout to take ova tha might

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it was alright needs work tho man 6/10 not bad for a newbie lol word on wordplay, vocab, and expression check my open mic peer presure the links in my sig

i dont know...might be good in audio...1

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7/10 i say nice verse mayne u in da crew or wot

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uppin ..............

need feedback

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aight man u can be in dopeness defined if you want start repping the sig......unless you are part of another group i appoligize for the wait mc rabbit isnt part of it nemore so yeh peace~1

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ty for the feedback to those who posted in here

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Yea not bad......need better wordplay.....and try not to right everything from a first person perspective.....show different views and angles and use some metaphorical lines....Dont just use one view in a song....mix it up sounds better