Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Blacklist
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 09-28-04 at 10:33 PM

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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 10:26 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 10:27 PM.

Phantom has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-28-04 10:27 PM.

so we finally meet after you talked all that shit
well damn, my hopes is higher than ya fuckin blacklist
you whack, straight ass, so stop thinkin you're big
ya rhymes is even less consistent than the quotes in ya sig
droppin 10 lyrical bombs and let them fall on ya heart
only reason council accpeted you? they was fallin apart
your not in my league homie, decrease your expectations
in ya verses, the only thing close to punches is ya explanations
burned cities to the ground, and now empires blown up
so turn ya fat ass around and go back to dum dum donuts

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so we finally meet after you talked all that shit
well damn, my hopes is higher than ya fuckin blacklist
no punch..prolly a personal i dont know you two well enough to tell

you whack, straight ass, so stop thinkin you're big
ya rhymes is even less consistent than the quotes in ya sig
personal...doesint really hit...

droppin 10 lyrical bombs and let them fall on ya heart
only reason council accpeted you? they was fallin apart
anotha personal...you must really know this cat

your not in my league homie, decrease your expectations
in ya verses, the only thing close to punches is ya explanations
..pretty funny second line..couldve been worded better and wouldve hit harder..

burned cities to the ground, and now empires blown up
so turn ya fat ass around and go back to dum dum donuts
..meh..nothing impressive

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overall this was a newbie drop....had some personals..but that was about it...they really didint hit...no vocab really...structure was there...on to the next dude..

Phantom known for nonsense rambling this where his opera ends
Like planes with one wing ya elevations frame is cursed to descend
Its pretty certain my verses is five-O like police unit
Im better but like viral e-mail letters you fail to compute it
Must be crazy but like ya avy i guess ya vision is blurry
At the most my words will roost 'Ghosts' like 'Bill Murray'
A.I name of a nerd why the password hiding ya chess secrets?
Not a vet k.oed ya text general i been exorting ya weakness
Thought you was nice saw ya OPEN MIC stopped and realized i was drunk
Shit is played if you wrote in Kooaid you couldnt come with a punch



Explanations-
real simple i koed A.Is text general archeologist the phantom of the opera for the first bar hes getting whacker for the second bar 5-0 is police meta for votes BILL MURRAY was the star of ghostbusters his crew is a.i and his avy look at it and see.Peace and all honest explained votes are returned so be honest and dont hate vote!!

Phantom known for nonsense rambling this where his opera ends
Like planes with one wing ya elevations frame is cursed to descend
..nice concept..but the second bar fucked it up..shouldve worded it better

Its pretty certain my verses is five-O like police unit
Im better but like viral e-mail letters you fail to compute it
retarded second line...and first line wouldve been dope is ya had "certain this battle is five-o like police units"[/b]

Must be crazy but like ya avy i guess ya vision is blurry
At the most my words will roost 'Ghosts' like 'Bill Murray'
personal first line...second line is lame

A.I name of a nerd why the password hiding ya chess secrets?
Not a vet k.oed ya text general i been exorting ya weakness
nothing but a personal..dont really hit hard

Thought you was nice saw ya OPEN MIC stopped and realized i was drunk
Shit is played if you wrote in Kooaid you couldnt come with a punch
second line is played to def...i like the one i used better awhile ago "lining up ya kool aid and you still couldint punch straight" or "spiking the kool aid you still couldint punch hard" blah



Explanations-
real simple i koed A.Is text general archeologist the phantom of the opera for the first bar hes getting whacker for the second bar 5-0 is police meta for votes BILL MURRAY was the star of ghostbusters his crew is a.i and his avy look at it and see.Peace and all honest explained votes are returned so be honest and dont hate vote!!
if ya gotta explain shit on this site then you seriousy shouldint be battling here


this guy had like 1 good punch and not as many personals.....better verse (which aint saying much)..you prolly came weak cause you didint wanna utterly desimate ya compitition...so props to you ya got my vote for a less weaker verse..

punches = this guy
vocab = nither
structure = both
personals = other guy
enjoyment = this guy
multiez = nither

my vote = this guy

make sure your blacklist goes poof and dont ride the voters dicks for votes kid.

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lol your shit is whacked i just fucking merked you and i will have strobe check your records of mail if any of my beefs come in here you pm for votes i will dq you this is a k.o here

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oka heres your plan i see already:

-go vote on battles
-tell them to vote on our battle and threaten them if they dont vote basically for you

but aint trippin cuz i ko'ed you and you bit that "5-0" line from my alias but since i aint tryin to expose myself, ill let it slide.

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wack phantom...

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-_-.............................not really, jpoll.

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Voted For: Empire

DAMN!!!break down...

Vocab - Empire (came wit sum real complex wordz)
Structure - Phantom (easier 2 read)
Flow - Empire (flowed smoothly...barz relatively same length)
Wordplay - Empire (wordplay like WHOA shit wuz krazii u da OMB of wordplay haha...specially dat koolaid shit)
Multiz - No1 realli
Personalz - Empire (no1 realli had that many but emp came wit a couple...he had more then phantom had)
Punchez - Empire (wordplay feedz into this shit wuz lyrical kraziness can't believe that shit i wuz readin)

phantom ya shit wuz kool 2 but empire shit wuz krazii as fuck it wuz goin ta phantom until i realized tha wordplay emp put into his verse so my vote iz...empire

get the fuck outta here you fake as gangster

i had more personals

he had only one line of wordplay and it was weak

most of the lines wasnt even punches for him

get the fuck outta here, i will whoop yo ass next time you pull this shit.

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