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In the fast lane your life goes fast It's time to take a journey into Tragedy's past When I was one adopted by jerome Chapman This was years before I started rappin My father held a scholarship for a year But then he died and so did his career He left his son and soon to be wife He died, and that was the end of his life It's just not fair that he couldn't live through But as I grew, I fell into the same trap, too But I lived the life that he couldn't see He died a 17 and that's the age of me I escaped the cage where your nigga is your enemy And cops turn misdemeanors into felonies Playin the game the stakes are a lot Either you're strung out on drugs, in jail or get shot So I take the pain and put it in a song Cause some of my niggas didn't last this long Life to them just didn't seem important As I watched their bodies get stiffer in the coffin A young black target for someone to shoot at life is like a war so i got stay ready for combat I seek a life more promising than a waiter The mass educator puttin pain on paper Life is a battle and strength is survival my mom told me when times got hard pick up the bible Some search for better but most won't even try to Cause every day a young dream is shatterin Pressure is painful, the burden is batterin It's time to take a journey into Tragedy's past I'm a reborn rebel and my intellect leaksThe life I lived..... i can relates to the streets Cause the past stays on my back to remind me feeling afraid is what you gain when you find me Heed the message I inject in your.........mind I just a young fella trying to make it in these tough.... times This is based on my life yo i been through some tough times but i have over come them and times are still hard for me but i never stop fighting cuz life is not easy but that does'nt mean u should give up. word of advise we all can make it through the struggle... i need sum feed back of this one luv to my nigga above jazale shell Last edited by J-Will : 09-29-04 at 05:29 PM. Reason: i need sum feedback |
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hell yea pimpin, that shit was strait as fuck n u kno what u talkin bout, when ever u hit the bottom the only way after that is up, good shit tho, peace
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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB -crunchy blac(three 6 mafia) i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged -styles p(the lox) u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice -I 20 Quote:
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yo good looking out much respect
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can ya'll give me some more feed back
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people i need sum more feedback
let me kno if u like it or u dont like it .......... |
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It was nice, I liked the way it flowed. If you do audio, I'd put this shit to a beat. Stay Up.
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iight.......thankz man................
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i need some more feedback.........
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that shit was deep and it came from the heart
yo jay keep ur head up man cuz u got skillz niggaz need to realize that u could be the best 1 |
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thankz man
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can i get some more feedback on this ........
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need some more
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