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View Poll Results: Wicked One vrs. Verbal Abuse
Wicked One 1 16.67%
Verbal Abuse 5 83.33%
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Old 09-29-04, 06:57 PM   #1
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Verbal Abuse vs Wicked One

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Old 09-29-04, 08:43 PM   #2
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Old 09-29-04, 09:02 PM   #3
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Verbal, you'll get your head served with several verbs...
Your worth is splurged on more bullshit than seven full-herds...
I'm be-headin your verse, so you can off tha top spit...
I got this,your gonna fall rank,your thoughts off tha top pick...
C'mon kid,didnt i beat u before, now you think that you can burn me...
Please, thats more absurd than seein Ol Dirty sing decent witout slurring...
Your Words need to be edited, your schemes are repetetive...
My Dopness brings you peace for resting in like sedative medicine...
You've been jetti-soned,so let me give you a parental advisory...
Ya style of rhymin's weak, if skill were measured in depth, you'd reach tha highest peak...


Aight now cmon check in n drop ur verse...
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Old 09-29-04, 11:20 PM   #4
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Old 09-29-04, 11:30 PM   #5
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Old 09-29-04, 11:34 PM   #6
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ya not spreadin feces, funny how he thinks hes contageously handin disease.
ive read ya punches. either ya always wack, or ya savin the ones that landed for me.
his rhymes are decent now n then, ya the type that laminates ya better drops.
the day i dont get a vote, is the day that SD's warm weather stops.
im not a textcee, cause its hard to hold back a line i knew would offend.
its why i could drop a topical in this text battle, and still come through with a win.
ya wittless fool, ya star 69'd ya computer...tyring to routte the call.
see, ya pointin to a direction ya cant reach, like a mouse without the ball.
ima pop ya like a pimple. ya lost 5 times...and you say your testing me.
Ha, well since its open note, ill just PM WordPlaya for the "defeat Wicked recipe".

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Old 09-30-04, 12:17 AM   #7
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

verbal good ass opener lol dope shit ender lol dope also good punches all the way through nice structure a few multis dope shit here a 8/10
wicked good opener too not as good as verbals but good shit also a few multis also and ender was kinda weak though punches hit good also and nice disses also no personals at all nice vocab a 7/10
basically verbal had harder punches and a dope ass personal also here and that gets my vote in a battle both are good but i think by a little verbal won this


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Old 09-30-04, 07:29 PM   #8
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open and still needing votes.
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Old 09-30-04, 08:01 PM   #9
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k pretty self gloerfied almost wicked one came out with better vocab whitch you need to have to have a complex verse and he had some pretty dope wordplay but not good enough to beat abususes but here check this out:

verbal abuse:
you came pretty hard but not enough you need to get some vocab in there nice multi's tho and wordplay was supper hot at the end nice verse 7/10

Wicked One:
you came so hot man yer vocab was super nice and you had alight wordplay and you played abuse with yer punches she got smashed with the way you were phrasen lol nice verse to just barly won tho 7.7/10

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Old 09-30-04, 10:20 PM   #10
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UUUUUUUUUUUUUUppppppppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn......... ...
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Old 09-30-04, 10:36 PM   #11
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IIGHT THEY BOTH WAS WEAK TA ME..VERB HAD SOME HARDER PUNCHES AND DECENT RHYMES STRUCTURE WAS KOO AND GOOD DISSES VOCAB AND PERSONALS...

WO URS WAS TO BASIC IIGHT PUNCHES AND EVERI THING JUSS 2 BASIC

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Old 10-02-04, 03:08 PM   #12
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need more votes, who wants to give em?
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Old 10-03-04, 07:13 PM   #13
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yo verbal abuse won dis one no question about it. harder punches, better vocab, betta flow and structure
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Old 10-06-04, 07:41 PM   #14
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Voted For: Verbal Abuse

Wicked: liked ya flow... lotta inners. Punches were kinda on n off, one would be hard then one would be weak.. some of ya wordplay was dope n original... But lines like that full-herd one were pretty played...

Punches: 6.5/10
flow:8/10
wordplay/Metas:7/10

Verb: Your vocab was way more complex than wickeds.. Flow was a little better cos of the multis.. Not much wordplay but you had some nice, original metas.. Punches were hitting either hard or average.. nice opener n closer.

Punches:8/10
Flow:9/10
Wordplay/Metas:7/10

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Old 10-06-04, 08:01 PM   #15
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Verbal took this with a verse that was harder hitting and much more consistent

Wicked one...you came pretty basic man...punches were meh...not a lot of creativity or wittness in your verse...you need to come up with better concepts man

Verbal Abuse....you had better concepts and your punches landed better...your punches were harder and your verse was a lot more conststent

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