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Old 09-29-04, 08:32 PM   #1
Ice Pick
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The stranger beside me , I can still smell her

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An object so amazing it changes the phrase of praises
An object so beautiful it can change the phase of typical male faces
An object so dense that it twists the very laws of time and space
An object so precious it'll never allow me to forget these wonderful days
wounds and scars, a force so strong it can rip my heart apart
stranger in the dark, a female so enchanting it's considered art
under pressure, this woman has an eye for maintaining sexual pleasure
my spirit lifts, heavily in love make my body weight as light as a feather
take care, as my veins pump i embrace these passionate emotions
my tongue is swollen, its the little bits of pieces that im holding
my knowledge is folded, the confidence in myself allows me to maintain a steady performance
close my eyes, i have fallen victim of this fatal curse
even worse, she has made my ability to breathe hurt
brilliant thoughts burst, feel at ease cause shes immune to offensive words


chorus:

Have you ever had a stranger beside you?//
Gave you that immense feeling deep within,as if they were inside you?//
and the rules you abide to, become mere obstacles//
because this special individual makes everything seem possible//
have you ever had a stranger who touched your hand//
to help you with the hardest things in life, when it seems like noone can//




An image whose distance is closer than my own heart
An image whose soul comes complete without any missin' parts
An image whose smart when I'm feelin' lost and confused
An image whose shine will lighten up my blues
An image whose formed to stay loyal and true
The image of this stranger is clearer than the sky bein' blue
SHe's sweeter than a sugar cube~ my thoughts encounter a toothache
SHe's opened up my life into a breathtakin' place
No matter if we're on a different page we're always readin' the same book
This stranger has poured into my heart without a second look

chorus:

Have you ever had a stranger beside you?//
Gave you that immense feeling deep within,as if they were inside you?//
and the rules you abide to, become mere obstacles//
because this special individual makes everything seem possible//
have you ever had a stranger who touched your hand//
to help you with the hardest things in life, when it seems like noone can//




Thinks to My Self
alittle too short dont you think?
Think of the meaning and the message behind what she makes me think

Continues on pondering

If a picture is a worth a thousand words, than imagine how many i can come up with in {person}
your tremendous image has an amazing vintage that can make typical men {forfeit}
millions of civilians line up to witness your grace, used an {old version}
blinded by lifes divine kindness, i have fallin {morbid}
Totouch with a gental grip, i bid thee thy {internal servent}

time is frozen, the gentle vocals of your voice swell up my throat, building emotion
walk in a constant motion, flow like the waves of the ocean
the way you feel, an individuals notion
i lay silent on the ground, my heart has been stolen
my thought have turned into desire, who have formed in to dreams
your infinite beauty clogs up my wind pipe, unable to breathe
for your love i cant die, no matter how much i bleed


my soul urges your presence, my spirit starts the burning of fire
an impatient sensation stirs up, waiting apon distant desires
this feeling will never leave me, not until my time expires
and its mostly your ability to choose me is what i mostly admire
confidence grown and and enemy feelings disappear
none interval with us, for that fact i carry no fear
against fool, for you i would go up against the worst of goons
depend on you for love and care, healing of my external wounds
depend on you for your ability to bear, even when my is apon an irrelevant dome
carry foams of perfume, time with you is the only time i consume the smell
The stranger beside me has taken me from my tomb and out of my own Personal hell


Thanks girl for being there




Dedicated to Her<<<<<<<<









<<<peace>>>
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Old 09-30-04, 01:14 PM   #2
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damn,,,wow, thats all i can say, you are a very talented writer, beautiful imagery, you should tell this girl how you feel........1
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Old 10-04-04, 12:53 PM   #3
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nice, really nice. but the lyrics dont intertwine do u understand, i kno i aint made it here but im jst sayin, nice thou
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