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Old 09-30-04, 10:59 PM   #1
4grand
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Sick new track, Take a read ya'll

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i bust caps in yo face
humpin at yo mama place,
poudin sluts, her and der
blowing loads, in yo mamas her.

i fuck bitches on the floor,
i fuck yo mom on the door,
i killed yo style and yo face
humpin at yo sistas place!

kill whitey, kill da dumb man
cause he aint givin me da crumb man.
Sends blax off to Vietnam,
humpin yo mama @ da hoover Dam
(fucked her like Sadam) *optional line ya'll

Ill bust yo face and yo ballz
killin whitey @ niagra fallz
ill bust ma load,
sincerley, Mr. Choad
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Old 09-30-04, 11:06 PM   #2
Ysdat
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the best part a this drop is you used my name twice.But for real this isnt good at all. you need to get off the topic off being harder than the next guy. That topic is played.It is full of simple rhyme's nothing really original everything is simple. My advice get more tech . Use word's that you dont ussually use in your everyday vocabulary. get more tech rhyme's .. your rhyme style is........
man ..
man..
vietnam..
dam..
this is to simple . Keep practising and elevating and you should be allright...............pz
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