This chick is the baddest, repurcussions is tragic, shittin on bastards,
blowin out skulls to make brains move faster,fu*kin w/a master,
I can't stand ni**as that act like bitches, and I don't fu*k w/cowards,
who know 4 bein' snitches, don't test me playa,
I don't bark, but my bite is viscious,
I can't stand bitches that act like ni**as,
sippin on nyak got em thinkin they got balls,
and puffed in the chest, you can't play me,
I'll snap on you quick like a dog with rabies,
this ish is gettin crazy,smoke til eyes lazy,
ni**as grab you di*ks, and ladies grab yo babies,
bite my tongue for no one, son,
I'm pullin ni**as card, tryin 2 act hard,
will only get you plucked out like chickens and strings on giutars.

let me just say that needs work badly yer stucure was bad and where was yer vocabulary

wow imma have to agree w/ Also...damn girl i mean it looks like u got MAD talent but on dis one u need to work on da structure n mostly da Vocab..keep it up

Man of corruption with no plan of construction two books written
But shook like kittens along the same line I aim rhymes forbidden
To cats, become an attacker not some actor with a part in a play
My heart sway violent and silent

yo gurl i have to say u have mad potential and keep postin n listen to ppl cus were here to help u out, yea work on ur struc and vocab also maybe some wordplay and i swear i heard that dog line used before buti could be wrong so try not to use similiar lines but any way keep postin gurl, hit my open mic up "cruelty" iite -1-

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