Battle Rules:

6 Lines only - 3bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-10-04 at 10:48 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

mc_funny1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 10:50 AM.

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-07-04 11:31 AM.

stop theres no need 4 u to drop
ur wack cant ryhme u no nothin bout hip-hop
u think ur some bad man but u just a wack fan
man u poor cudnt aford a can ur no real man
kill u smak u w.e will hurt u is the best
i have won no matter wot so be my guest

uppin 4 votes..........
pz

come on elusiv i anit got all year to wait 4 u ya no hurry up damn

Shit yo first battle u dun lost and now ur record is zero to one
Ur already lookin shit, it dnt help that ur name is mc_funny1//*

Lol, and ur rapper is called funny cunt, dam u must b dumb
r makin urself easy to rip, u loosin this shit fast as if u were dj quik//**

Ma shit is sik like ballerz at rucka, dnt call me undacova brotha
but like Eddie griffin, im nuttin but solid, even wen im spittin'//***

*= his record is o-1 and name is mcfunny1
**= his rapper called funny cunt
*** = film undercover brotha.catchline is sollid and eddie griffin is tha star and is pimped out. nice ending punch

hey yo this man is tryin 2 hurrying me up and then he goes and posts a wack verse like that...nigga please. Council 4eva. Peace

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Voted For: Elusiv G

stop theres no need 4 u to drop
ur wack cant ryhme u no nothin bout hip-hop
u think ur some bad man but u just a wack fan
man u poor cudnt aford a can ur no real man
kill u smak u w.e will hurt u is the best
i have won no matter wot so be my guest
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ WACK VERSE DIDNT SEE ANY PUNCHES,,,,,,,,HAD FLOW,,,,,,,,,BUT NO PUNCHES WERE HITTIN IT,,,,,,,,,,,,MC_FUNNY1 ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES OK,,,,,,AND USE PERSONALS


Shit yo first battle u dun lost and now ur record is zero to one
Ur already lookin shit, it dnt help that ur name is mc_funny1//*

Lol, and ur rapper is called funny cunt, dam u must b dumb
r makin urself easy to rip, u loosin this shit fast as if u were dj quik//**

Ma shit is sik like ballerz at rucka, dnt call me undacova brotha
but like Eddie griffin, im nuttin but solid, even wen im spittin'//***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT MAYNE NICE VERSE HERE U HAD NICE FLOW,,,,,,,PERSONALS AND PUNCHES,,,,,,,,

I GIVE DIS VOTE TO

ELUSIV G CAUSE HE JUST CAME HARDER AND BETTA WITH SOME PERSONALS AND PUNCHES


MC_FUNNY1 ELEVATE USIN PUNCHES
IF U NEED HELP GO TO TUTRIALS

MC_FUNNY1 USE PUNCHES "OK" U'LL GET BETTA


ELUSIV G RETURN AN FAV

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Voted For: Elusiv G

both were pretty wack but mc funny's spit was laughable lol. sorry son but u need to elevate alot. work on punches and personals n making it flow better when u read it to urself.
Elusive-G wins this bcuz he had actual things to vote on like punches. But his werent' too hot either work on originality more.

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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

holla at me wit n honest vote
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Open Mic's

Lick Shots=Hitchcock feat Paul Cain and The Sick One
Opposite of Cold= The Cartel
Dear Others=Hitchcock
Kill That Static=Hitchcock

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Voted For: Elusiv G

I Give this To Elusiv.....

MC Funny One: Structure Was Aight. Flow Was Decent. Punches were Kinda Weak. No Use Of Metas Or Wordplay. Not Really Anything Near A Complex Verse.

Elusiv: Damn You Definatly Gettin Betta. Ya Got Ya Structure On Lock. Nice Job. Flow Was On Point. Ya Gettin Alot Betta Wit Ya Punches Too. Nice Metas Here. Good Job. Ya Def Elevating.

Vote Elusiv G

Return tha Favour.....

Voted For: Elusiv G

this battle was wack both ways.Neither had good punches or metas or anything.Elusiv came a little bit harder with punches even though they were wack too.mc funny1,you really need to elevate because your verse,even though it was short,was torture to sit through.Both need to elevate with wordplay,punches,structure,and vocab.Don't be scared to throw in the occasional personal either you guys.
V/Elusiv.
return the favour.