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I'm So Punny
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Guess the Reason...ft. Jimmy Vodka,Woodzy
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this is another verbal tactics type of song give it a listen, yes its new school, and you guys probably won't appreciate it because were not thugs...but you can't compare to my lyrics...peace
produced by cerulean 1st verse=jimmy vodka hook=people at a party 2nd verse=woodzy 3rd verse=JP hook=again at a party 4th verse=jimmy vodka www.soundclick.com/jpoll
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listening ... first guy not very good at all... hears hoook thats tight i like that thats bad ass then woodzy is aight jp the best on the entire track sitll pretty good overall
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!!!THA HOODZ BEST!!!
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IP:
OK jp did his thing on tha joint wazz not really feelin tha other niggz / tha beat wazz good tho / tha hook carryed tha track other then that tha song waz (yea-N-na) to me ...........................BUT if its ya sound like u said NEWSCHOOL keep doin u......EZ
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP:
Ok first thing I noticed about this song is the beat...the beat was ill.....quality of this track was great.....all your lyrics were decent...1st guy had no flow was so ever but his delivery was decent.....2nd guy flow was better still not great but a decent spit...JP flow was fair but his delivery was nice...I liked the anger in ya voice it fit track well....4th verse donr by first guy had same weak flow....an that outro was wack might wanna cut that...hook wasn't good it seemed over processed...too many effects an jus didn't flow well wit track not a bad track overall a 6/10 jus some remastering an tweeking of ya lytrics an wit this beat it would be a great track.
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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The Light
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IP:
listeniing...
first guy: LMFAO @ guy just screaming out of no where.... hook: nice hook Second guy: he aight.. not bad, but not great... third guy: JP u is aight dun!!.. the beggign was pretty nice.. u did pretty good.. kinda fell off at the end tho.. not a biggy tho.. fourth guy: ehhhh lmao @ the crack line.. ROFL @ THE END LOL *walks away laffing hysterically* and oh, nice track ![]()
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
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I'm So Punny
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IP:
thanks guys for the feedback, please keep it coming...drop a link ill give all your new stuff feedback...peace...
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
Jpoll sounded best of all the emcees.... first guy fell off the beat constantly but he was feeling himself while doin it...lol-- Hook was meh-- just cuz it could have been better... but overall I liked this shit, the beat was dope, and it was original.... ez.
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Flyweight
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IP:
sickness man, this was fire by jp...funny ass shit...good drop man, i liked it alot!
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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IP:
First cat - fell off the beat a few times, but had some decent lines. Good emotion, although went a lil crazy there for a sec. lol. Hook - good. I like the hook idea fa sho. Second cat, Not bad. Lyrics so so, but came on the beat aight. JPoll. Wow - this WAS the best I heard from you. You seriously have come along way man. Even just recently. From the beginning of "Misery" to this, I have seen mad improvement. Keep coming like this, but you should take it a little more seriously. I know this is all ya'll's style, but this track was pretty good man.
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