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Old 10-10-04, 05:12 PM   #1
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Guess the Reason...ft. Jimmy Vodka,Woodzy

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this is another verbal tactics type of song give it a listen, yes its new school, and you guys probably won't appreciate it because were not thugs...but you can't compare to my lyrics...peace
produced by cerulean

1st verse=jimmy vodka
hook=people at a party
2nd verse=woodzy
3rd verse=JP
hook=again at a party
4th verse=jimmy vodka


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Old 10-10-04, 05:22 PM   #2
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listening ... first guy not very good at all... hears hoook thats tight i like that thats bad ass then woodzy is aight jp the best on the entire track sitll pretty good overall
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Old 10-10-04, 05:40 PM   #3
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OK jp did his thing on tha joint wazz not really feelin tha other niggz / tha beat wazz good tho / tha hook carryed tha track other then that tha song waz (yea-N-na) to me ...........................BUT if its ya sound like u said NEWSCHOOL keep doin u......EZ
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Old 10-10-04, 05:45 PM   #4
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Ok first thing I noticed about this song is the beat...the beat was ill.....quality of this track was great.....all your lyrics were decent...1st guy had no flow was so ever but his delivery was decent.....2nd guy flow was better still not great but a decent spit...JP flow was fair but his delivery was nice...I liked the anger in ya voice it fit track well....4th verse donr by first guy had same weak flow....an that outro was wack might wanna cut that...hook wasn't good it seemed over processed...too many effects an jus didn't flow well wit track not a bad track overall a 6/10 jus some remastering an tweeking of ya lytrics an wit this beat it would be a great track.
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Old 10-10-04, 10:26 PM   #5
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listeniing...

first guy: LMFAO @ guy just screaming out of no where....
hook: nice hook
Second guy: he aight.. not bad, but not great...
third guy: JP u is aight dun!!.. the beggign was pretty nice.. u did pretty good.. kinda fell off at the end tho.. not a biggy tho..
fourth guy: ehhhh lmao @ the crack line..
ROFL @ THE END LOL *walks away laffing hysterically*

and oh, nice track
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Old 10-11-04, 12:07 AM   #6
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thanks guys for the feedback, please keep it coming...drop a link ill give all your new stuff feedback...peace...
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Old 10-12-04, 10:05 PM   #7
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Jpoll sounded best of all the emcees.... first guy fell off the beat constantly but he was feeling himself while doin it...lol-- Hook was meh-- just cuz it could have been better... but overall I liked this shit, the beat was dope, and it was original.... ez.
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Old 10-18-04, 03:35 PM   #8
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sickness man, this was fire by jp...funny ass shit...good drop man, i liked it alot!
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Old 10-20-04, 01:38 AM   #9
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First cat - fell off the beat a few times, but had some decent lines. Good emotion, although went a lil crazy there for a sec. lol. Hook - good. I like the hook idea fa sho. Second cat, Not bad. Lyrics so so, but came on the beat aight. JPoll. Wow - this WAS the best I heard from you. You seriously have come along way man. Even just recently. From the beginning of "Misery" to this, I have seen mad improvement. Keep coming like this, but you should take it a little more seriously. I know this is all ya'll's style, but this track was pretty good man.
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