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Old 10-10-04, 08:03 PM   #1
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Exclamation Poet-iKal........... join up..!!

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you can be in any crew..this will be like a poetic dream team..u can specialize in poetry topical poetry audio topical audio
leader:shadow
co-leader: abstrakt
topical: appocalypse
topical: str8hood
topical: hope
topical: nostradamus
poetry leader: valor
no matter what crew u from were fam here
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Old 10-10-04, 08:05 PM   #2
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So are you leaving AI ?
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Old 10-10-04, 08:32 PM   #3
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oh damn. thats all i got to say. well check my link in my sig and tell me how bad i suck
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Old 10-10-04, 08:46 PM   #4
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no im not leaviong AI its a topical crew u can be in an y crew u want and be in thsi crew at the same time
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Old 10-10-04, 10:18 PM   #5
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lol..only if u say im good then im in!!! (dno't forget to get on ur knees and beg please!!) and no im not kidding lol
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Old 10-10-04, 10:18 PM   #6
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poetry.......
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Old 10-10-04, 10:23 PM   #7
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They are both the same ^
well kinda.. and plz don't explain how they are different valor.. lol
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Old 10-10-04, 10:30 PM   #8
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no i was sayin let me in
u idiot
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Old 10-10-04, 10:41 PM   #9
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Yeah ok. Should be fun.

You can add me if you want to.
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Old 10-11-04, 12:57 AM   #10
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This is my FIRST ever topical, it was in an in crew battle, it was my first so ya, bad structure and no vocab, so next time I will have better structure and vocab, but just tell me if this is enough to get in

TOPIC: FINDING OUT YOUR ADOPTED
School's over, i'm on my way to a friend's house, gonna hang out by her pool/
I get pushed into the water, as they laugh i feel like a fool, but we friends so it's cool/
So as time progresses, I call my dad to pick me up, the day has ended/
He arrives, I get into the car, see a sad look on his face, there's tension i can feel it/
Arrive home, walk in the living room, saw my mom, she had a look that was debating/
Couldn't tell whether i was in trouble or she was, I was still wondering, contemplating/
She asked me to have a seat, and said " There's something that we gotta do "/
" Me and your dad have kept a secret, but we think you're finally old enough to tell you "/
She hesitated, thought a bit, then said " Honey, you are adopted "/
" We got you at an orphanage when you were a one year old kid "/
Faint memories appear of a family that used to be, how could my real parents just abandon me?/
I'm lost in my mind, overwhelmed by a blinding anger, I can barely see/
I burst into tears and yell " how could you not have told me this before, how! "/
As I rushed to my room, i turn and shout " how the hell am i supposed to call you mom now? "/
I begin to resolve my dilema, these are the people who raised me, my real mom and i love her/
All of a sudden i start to choke, as i think " if i'm adopted, what about my sister? "/
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Old 10-11-04, 01:03 AM   #11
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add me im a poetry guy... i love to write shit bout gurls n shit..you feel..? heres a verse from a collab with still remain..Song: Its Love

When people reach out to ask for a date…
Its hard to be on time and not be late…
Some guys try to write rap songs or poetry…
To get there respect and love from there one to be…
Sometimes I just say whats up how are you today…
Some people just get nervous and just say hey…
If I had to I would smother you by giving you all my admiration…
Now that I have raised the sparks, I hit my destination…
Love is a big word, say it and if you don’t mean-it…
Your person friend might not enjoy it, and you’ll be forced to submit…
Most people don’t get married for love, but just for the money…
Love is more like when people try to make each other laugh, its funny…
Workin every damn day, us men come home to relax…
And then we find are girls cheating on us, look I know the facts…
Some people just say rude words and think there being sarcastic…
But no it feels like there chucking hard chunks of plastic…
They think it don’t hurt are feelings, they think were like elastic…
Love is when you don’t have to act in someone else’s situation…
Stand back give them room to breathe, now theres time for relaxation…
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Old 10-11-04, 01:06 AM   #12
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i want in valor beat me 5-4 with his dr votes i shouldve won though
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Old 10-11-04, 01:13 AM   #13
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Old 10-11-04, 01:14 AM   #14
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this isnt a crew you dick
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Old 10-11-04, 01:40 AM   #15
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this isnt a crew you dick

yes it is u dick

and im tha leader of the poetry section u whore
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