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Old 10-11-04, 02:13 PM   #1
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5 of RV's Finest Topical Writers.

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Leave links and I'll get bk to you no matter who you are.
I only know of a few good topical writers on ths site at
the minute so I can't invite who I think should be in the crew.
If you are a good writer with potential then I'll look at you.
If you have a dope piece then post it.

I won't discriminate against anyone, just don't post
if you knwo you don't even have a little potential.
Sorry.

This will be all topical elite.
Only 6 people.
Constant collabs.

Crew will be called-

The Commune

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Daz
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Old 10-11-04, 02:34 PM   #2
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Word. Good Shit

We got Nastrudamus, Vango, Daz & Mad Dog

All of em pretty good audiowise
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Old 10-11-04, 03:16 PM   #3
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Check The Link In My Profile Homie

Also Heres 2 Link Ta Some Other Openmics

~THE CROSS~Open Mic Link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152479

~Deep~Open Mic Link
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=151591
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Old 10-11-04, 03:38 PM   #4
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Sorry to sound an ass but you're not there yet.
Write some more and concentrate on upping the
context of your pieces.

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Old 10-11-04, 03:40 PM   #5
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Aight Thanks And Appriciate The Honost Advice Homie

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Old 10-11-04, 10:50 PM   #6
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Another 4 peeps are still to be added to the roster.
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Old 10-11-04, 11:09 PM   #7
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i dont even know why im posting but im alright not read tho but ya i collab just now with you...
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Old 10-11-04, 11:15 PM   #8
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Old 10-11-04, 11:18 PM   #9
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wow. DV just signs me up. ok im in

But DV on RB go sign up fo r my crew in my forum called Cliche` Killers
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Old 10-11-04, 11:23 PM   #10
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Old 10-11-04, 11:41 PM   #11
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Apocalypse this is hard..

I read the piece and I wasn't feeling the first part but
I thought the second part was really good.
I don't know why in the hell you used "..." for a topical lol.
I used to use them to illustarte wordplay bk in 01 lol.
Anyways you had a nice flow, good read and your
contextual writing was consistent.

But because I'm unsure I'll wait for Key Rogue(DV)
to see what he thinks too..
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Old 10-11-04, 11:47 PM   #12
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w33rd.....an dv if you see this get on aim we need to talk serious bizness......
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Old 10-11-04, 11:54 PM   #13
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lol..who ever the leader of the crew is..i'll battle u... n plz don't say i ain't good enough.. cuz i surely am!!
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Old 10-11-04, 11:55 PM   #14
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Sup BI. Hook me up with your AIM.
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Old 10-11-04, 11:58 PM   #15
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yo poet.. im me... u have my sn rite?
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