my rhymes move round more tracks than a roller coster
one day I might even beat busta and be able to rost yer
When I bust raps you collapse and break ya till ya neck snaps
listen to my raps when I bust back on audio and it an't wack
Talkin shit i'll kick ya................ down as if you were a migit
not giving a shit just............ give ya amnezia wid a fist hit

Can I just say at this point am I doing multies right im trying to learn how to do em..... cause I might not be doing them correctly thats how I feel.

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thats not what I asked???? I need help wid multies if you can read????.

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Can I just say at this point am I doing multies right im trying to learn how to do em..... cause I might not be doing them correctly thats how I feel.

^Tell Me Where It Say Ya Need Help???

I Was Offering An Opinion.

I need to know how to contruct dem in a bar???

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Ya Those Were Alright I Mean The Punches And Flow Hit Hard And Direct But
There Werent Really Any Multis In There Ya Improvin Tho Homie Good Drop..
8/10

Return The Favor Please

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=154621

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Yo If I Find A Good Tutorial Ill Be Glad Ta Give It Ta Ya Homie

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just need someone to give me some bar and multie tips good ones aswell. Thanks

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Aight Ill Try Ta MAke A Good Explanation For Ya Aigth Then Send It Ta Ya

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yo check omb's multi tutorial in the help forum's.

But yeah this didnt really have tight multi's in it.
try using more complex word's that way you can get smaller word's out of them easier.
for instance:
im furiously addicted to perseption's.
I got curiously convicted i need new direction's..

feel me??

anyway check omb's multi tutorial ... I never seen it but I heard it help's..
pz